the plot is adorable. only everything was ruined by grammar. Sorry to seem so critical, but you've got sentences and paragraphs that are difficult to understand. I would beta, if you're not opposed )

I liked it, but your story moved, just a bit, too fast. There was not enough detail. It was still good, though.

Loved this pairing. I only wish there had been more interaction between them in each chapter.

The premise was really fun and interesting but the relationship moves way too fast. I also felt that it wasn’t really explained well why both Hermione and Draco wanted to do this. But your writing is pretty good.

I really liked the idea of the story. Unfortantly, for my taste it moved waay to fast. Therefore there was no conection to the characters and the story it self. But keep writing and practicing.

What a nice story

Hermione is pretty straightforward in this haha I love that!

hadn't eexpected Draco to agree so easily, but I bet there will still be drama ahead :D

It's great to have a story start directly in the action, it really draws the reader in. Int he beginning there could have been a little more description about the setting and time the story takes place in, maybe some subtle clues so it's easier to find orientation within the plot :)

that cliffhanger at the end is fantastic :D really intriguing!

Great chapter.

Sweet chapter.

It is getting better and better.

Haha this is good.

depends. does the serious intense end in fluff or more?

Hope you are feeling better already or at least on the way to good health. Seems to be developing into a good little story so far. Those Weasley's! So like to live up to their red hair with all those howler's and anger.

ohhhh interesting concept~ i am also baffled that you can spit out a chapter a day XDDD