Aw, darning cliff hangers!
Keep up the good work!

This fic is awesome! keep up the good work.

Well, I certainly enjoy it. Considering that English isn’t your first language, I would say it’s rather impressive. There are a few minor errors in spelling, usually words that are spelled similarly but have different meanings, and it can be somewhat difficult to know specifically who is talking, but overall I’d say you’re very talented.

SO GOOD PLEASE UPDATE