Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

okay this has turned into quite a good read. i love the star wars esqu story about sasuke. there are some parallels between the two. i cannot wait til the next chapter

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Really copied the anakin vs obi-wan fight lol

"I have the high ground." Was that necessary? Hopefully, I couldn't stop laughing.

Well now this was fun

Ok this just got ridiculous I’m out

yay Congrats to Ino for Poison Mistress. Love that Danzo is on the run. However, Kiba with a stronger Curse Mark than Sasuke is worrisome. Looking forward to what you give us next

I remember this fanfic now! I saw it and thought to myself, "That title sounds familiar, but I don't know if I read it or simply bypassed it looking for something to read..." But anyway... this isn't about the fanfic per say, but more on those that have flamed you... I am not one of them... or at least I hope I'm not... Allow me to clarify... I am of the opinion that constructive criticism is very important to every author, but flames do absolutely nothing for anyone what so ever. As such Allow me to say this... WRITE IT YOUR WAY! Masashi Kishimoto did, Tite Kubo did, every manga author has it and whilst it does make people mad or sad; Ichigo and Orhime from Bleach being together and Natsu and Lucy from Fairy Tail being two for me, but I understand that it is the author's decision, not my own so I read fanfics where the pairings I like are a thing. I'm not one for a Naruto getting with Fuu, but I've read tons worse than that so I am of the opinion that it is the lesser of two evils. I would also like to reiterate this, write it your way. If you want it to be NarutoxInoxFuu then by all means do so! It's your story, do it how you want to! As far as I'm concerned, anyone who's reading it, shouldn't have too much of a say in it to begin with as that just allows them to begin to walk all over the author. Polls are a good middle in that regard, but it's not a perfect solution. As such, don't let me not liking Fuu being with Naruto persuade you from removing her from the pairing please cause as I always tell my friends, who don't read fanfics mind you, that I read them for fun and honestly I picture it in my head and enjoy it or "I'm in it for the ride". On another note, the whole "Naruto's mother being from the royal lineage of Uzushio" has been done before and allow me to say this before you think I'm about to harp on the fanfic, cause I'm not, I find those to be enjoyable cause it adds more depth of character for both Naruto and Kushina as a whole. Cause I mean, what did Masashi Kishimoto give us in relation to Kushina? One she's from the Uzumaki Clan whom have the gift of longevity and were known for their Fuuinjutsu prowess. Two she's a red head which is hereditary apparantly. Three she was the Jinchuuriki for Kurama before Naruto and after Mito. Three she was married to Minato Namikaze. Four she hates the color of her hair, but loves those that compliments it. Five she was a wonderful Kunoichi, a loving mother, and an excellent woman. That's basically it! (I did leave somethings out, but this is just a summary of it all) So doing that adds more character to them. Anyhow I'm done with this review and I would like to say good luck writing!

What know one knows don't you mean what on one knows?
Her lost at Temari, this should read Her lost to Temari.
The story is good and it keeps mean reading.

what is a flask jacket. What liquid does it hold? Did you mean a flak jacket, something to keep projectiles from hitting you?
Try to read out loud what you put down when you read. spell check does not get the correct words in a story only if it is spelled correctly.

tnx 4 the chapter

There is no Namikaze clan

Minato was an orphan

beautiful chapter indeed

No didn’t see Kiba with a curse mark but will always see him taking anything hit for Hinata!