I want to see more

More! I absolutely love all that you write. It feels so fresh reading these.

Please come back.

Please continue.

Its ten thirty. I work early in the morning. but I REALLY needed this.

This may not mean all too much coming from a random like me, but after reading through ALL your stories and author's notes and seeing the downward spiral your thoughts were taking recently, I feel I need to say something. Not just to you, but also as a very sternly-worded message to your detractors.

Fuck 'em.

Fuck each and every single one of their lazy, snarky, impossible-to-please punk asses.

You're creating too much Naruto content? Remind me HOW many fanfics exist for that series already? How many times its lore has evolved & changed, causing budding writers to gain new and creative ideas as to how things could be different?

Making too many Fate-related stories? Again, how many paths are there to take, how many variations of damn near EVERY. SINGLE. NAMED. CHARACTER exist throughout its branching multiverse? As in, the NON-fanfic multiverse? Is it so wrong to want to explore it a bit and maybe even throw in a nice bit of chaos? It's not as though unexpected arrivals and shit always completely hitting the fan in the most mind-bendingly insane ways are hallmarks of the series or anything...oh wait, they ARE.

And I might be in the minority, but I honestly enjoy the Beast!Naruto character. A lot, actually. But I can't see exactly how people can complain about it showing up so often when its original appearance specifically made it out to be a dimensional-traveling monstrosity who's STATED GOAL is to annihilate every Naruto within the multiverse it can sink its claws into. On top of that, it's also clearly a far cry from being a "villain sue" thanks to the incarnations which are a wee bit out of its weight class. Puts a great big smile on my face every damn time.

But let me return to the point. These pissants who constantly bash your fics are not the writer. YOU are. They are not the ones who created these tales. YOU are. They did not take lord knows however much time is necessary to not only come up with the ideas, but type them out. YOU did.

Seeing you crank out chapters day after day has inspired me to resume my own fics, after a literal 3-YEAR hiatus. You single-handedly renewed my interest in creating fanfiction. And I can no longer sit idly by and watch as these outlandish, mudslinging blowhards bash and break you down piece by piece.

I made sure this review is as long as it is in the hopes that you, them, and all my fellow supporters of Neon fanfiction can bear witness and take notice. That the constant and consistent instances of flaming, hate, and trolling are not and never will be appreciated, wanted, nor warranted. It is pathetic, it is juvenile, and I refuse to stay silent over it any longer. If they don't like what they're reading, they can kindly fuck off and let those who ARE enjoying the myriad of tales you bring do so without the droning negativity they seem hell-bent on carrying along with them.

In the meantime, you do whatever the hell you want and take solace in knowing there is and ALWAYS will be people who absolutely adore your work.

Peace, Zangetsu.

Great great very nice

I like this. I want to see where this goes.

Great chapter. Ah, Papa Naruto is still best Naruto even when he is not completely Naruto. Protect that innocent child Kuramuto, protect her. And Illya still thinking he is a Berserker makes me smile. Please keep up the great work and ignore all the haters and flamers they are just jealous of your talent.

More material with an interesting twist once more, my compliments to your muse.

More naysayers I see, hope you don't mind my shortening your pen-name, but I want you to read and heed what I am writing, Neon - I do not know if these naysayers of your own good self have read my last review (I suspect some of them have from the blustering).

Of late you are updating stories every 3-4 days, lets say that maybe 10% of people who read leave a comment for better or worse, as you write on each chapter if people do not leave likes, you will take down a story. Even with you naysayers I am not seeing much, if any taken down, if that does not show VISIBLE support from your readers, I am at a lose to what may do so.

Find my last review and go through it again, all this bluster is making me more & more sure of your flamers nature - whoever they are they are mindless mounds of spite, that have no problem talking tough through a screen but would not dare if they met you on the street. I sometimes get people like these online with PSN (declaring console allegiance) that talk or message all kinds of things - but all stop or log out when they realize that I am both unmoved and will cut their statements apart with logic - I am not bothered by them again.

Keep this in mind Neon, you have plenty of people who like and support your works.
Before the last 2 weeks, I have not been on your page in over a year, now when I am online you are routinely one of the first five writers I am checking for updates on works.

Invariably I am finding a variety of mental stimulation going on - naysayers saying a Beast is repetitive? they are a notable part of a interweaving plot binding your stories (I keep finding curve-balls thrown in that only enriches your works). I read your comments on the first line of this chapter and instantly thought that if your naysayers do not even know the canon material YOUR INTERPRETATION is based off, so what grounds do they have to stand on and mouth off at you?.

My apologies if this seems long winded but I feel it needs saying given how these naysayers are wearing at you. Keep this and my other reviews in mind if you get more - I know I'll be here waiting.

May your muse never die.

I like it very much

Really enjoying this one seeing the little psycho get treated right always brings a smile to my face and I'm glad she and Kurama I'm having a good adventure and that she won't get checked by Goldie. I really hope to see more of this one soon because alter ego is now climbing up the ranks of my favored stories

Ohhhh kurama VS Giglamesh that would be EPICCCCCC...

Illya is adorable plz update and keep this chapter

To all of you sending out death threats and tell Neon to kill himself: FUCK. OFF.