Reviews for The Palace Guard
Boa Jade and Vinsmoke Julie chapter 26 . 1/23
Please do a sequel! We love this story! We wanna see Jim and Ariel be Melody's parents in a story
Amalia Santoro chapter 26 . 9/8/2019
Ahhhhh I can't believe it's over! What a happy endingSo glad that Sarah and Silver got together, as well as Eric and Alana. Appreciated the time jump so we could skip ahead to when Jim got to come back to Earth permanently, I knew he could do itI enjoyed your story so much! Do you think perhaps you might write a sequel?
Amalia Santoro chapter 25 . 9/3/2019
Loved the scenes with Jim and Ariel getting some well deserved R&R. That made it so much sadder when he had to go back home! I wonder what will happen in the meantime? Will we see that nasty pirate again? And I had to laugh when Ariel's sisters started flirting with Eric. How adorable! I think it would definitely help Eric get over Ariel if he got to date one of her sisters. Things would be less awkward at least lol Anyways, excited for the next chapter and hope that Silver gets to take Sarah on that date soon!
Amalia Santoro chapter 24 . 8/28/2019
Awesome! I was not expecting 2 chapters at once! And what a battle! I'm hesitant to believe that Ursula is truly dead though, I wouldn't put it past her to have a few tricks up her sleeve and she's only letting them all believe that she is dead in order to lure Ariel back to Earth. Or I could be totally wrong! Either way, I very much enjoyed the action as well as the tender moment between Sarah and Silver.
Amalia Santoro chapter 22 . 8/25/2019
Wow, way to go Silver! I can't wait for them to get back and see how Silver's date with Sarah goes. Heh, maybe the four of them can go on a double date if it goes well! And surely Eric will be pleasantly surprised by this visit!
Amalia Santoro chapter 21 . 8/19/2019
Yay! Cuteness appreciatedSilver is so slick, offering his services as a cook, although Sarah is clearly not naive when it comes to men. I hope that maybe they'll get together, that would be so cute! And Jim and Ariel deserved a little relaxation after the month they've had! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Amalia Santoro chapter 20 . 8/13/2019
Ahhhhhh so they want to recruit Silver! Thought for sure they were just gonna throw him in jail! I'd love to see Silver face off against Ursula with his bazooka
Amalia Santoro chapter 19 . 8/11/2019
I've always kind of liked the idea that Silver might be into Jim's mom. He can be his new daddy xD Excited to see how their plans go!
Amalia Santoro chapter 18 . 8/11/2019
Yay! They are finally reunited! All 3 of them And you're welcome for the hat idea! Red hair is both a blessing and a curse, I'm afraid xD Curious to see exactly what Silver has been up to all this time...
1shownu chapter 18 . 8/4/2019
They’re finally reunited! Really curious to see how how different Jim and Silvers relationship/interactions will be after the years aparthow all this business with the academy will come into play. Can’t wait for the next update
Amalia Santoro chapter 17 . 7/31/2019
I loved this chapter! So much excitement! Glad Ariel and Silver were able to escape, and maybe he can resume teaching her self defense once they're back with Jim?
Amalia Santoro chapter 16 . 7/28/2019
Oh I love Ariel and Silver's interaction! And look at BEN being useful! I love the way the story is going, and also wondering what will happen to Silver once Jim and his crew find him.
Amalia Santoro chapter 15 . 7/24/2019
OH my gosh I did not see that coming! I kind of suspected when Captain Collver said they had the best cook in the universe, but...I can legitimately say that I was pleasantly surprised! Maybe Ariel's new friend will give her a knife or something to use on the captain if he gets too close? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Amalia Santoro chapter 14 . 7/21/2019
This chapter was so exciting! Love the details about launching the ship and Ariel interacting with the crew. Maybe Jim should find a hat to hide Ariel's hair so as not to attract unwanted attention?I bet Ariel will insist on the dinner so that she can help find Silver, much to Jim's dismay haha
Amalia Santoro chapter 13 . 7/20/2019
I really liked this chapterSo excited that Ariel gets to go with Jim on his voyage, although let's be honest, she would have found a way to sneak aboard had she not been invited! Really curious to see why they bumped up their departure time so suddenly, and even more curious as to what Silver has been up to...
Keep up the great work! This story is so good!
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