pleasee continue it !
its amazing

Ok I love this plz update

que escribas un capitulo largo no necesariamente tiene que ser el corto el siguiente debiera ser al revez... ir mejorando segun va avanzando la historia no retrocediendo por lo demas me gusta como va la historia.

Wait wheres chapters 1-3? The LAST chapter was the Prologue, yet the Chapter # in this chapter says its chapter 4.

where's chapters 1 2 and 3

I'm not here to criticize or anything, but just to give you some helpful advice from one writer to another. I think you need to get a Beta reader or someone to read your stories. Hell, I'll even be your beta reader if you PM me. But I think you may want to work on the flow of your sentences. To be honest, I still have a lot to work on even though I'm about to finish high school.
But that's my advice to you. I know nothing great happens over night and I just want to help you with your writing. So best of luck to you and just know that my offer is always open. Just PM me.

Can't wait till the next chappie!

I don't see one reviewer turning around and being pushy about publishing more for this story. If you are receiving reviews, those are reviews and opinions. It seems that there are mixed reviews with more people giving you criticism than demands for more chapters.

However, to the review of this story. I don't like it. I don't like your writing. I don't like the fact that you don't seem to grasp the characterization of any of the characters. I don't like how you write characters that you obviously don't like or feel uncomfortable with.

I don't like one thing about this story. Not one thing.

I would have liked to read if lily purposely give up harry pr something rather than dumbledor obviating lily and all I mean only dumbledor can polite pei

Well okay I haven’t read enough of these types of fics. I hope this one is long and affords much laughter :)
Let there be chaos

This is actually really good pls continue writting

I don't think much of this. You are another writer who's main purposes for writing is to make ageist remarks about Dumbledore. You are evil like Skeeter.
There is nothing original about the rest of the chapter and it is messy at best.

Wait they hit Lily with a 'COUPLE of obliviation charms'?! If they really hit her with THAT many, what did they erase exactly that ONE obliviation couldn't do? *lol* though why use obliviation? Instead of using something like Imperio to make her think she willingly gave Harry up? Otherwise unless hes not getting an invite to Hogwarts in ten years, howa she going to react when a boy she can't remember shows up to school? *lol*