You call hiccup toothless when he goes to mount clawless

Oooh, I love it!

While I can get behind Astrid caring for Hiccup, I think you made her feelings of guilt and pain come just a bit too strong here. Always cold, food losing its taste, etc. Don't get me wrong, I think she'd really berate herself, but this seems more like a reaction to a loved one dying.

An interesting story so far, I look forward to seeing what happens next and best of luck with everything.

Will the light fury make an appearance?

I love this so much! Clawless is hilarious! Pretending to not care about Hiccup and teasing Toothless and her name is the cherry on top!

This is great, can’t wait for more!

Interesting start. Just when I thought I had finally gotten myself out of the HTTYD craze, this comes along. You even presented multiple Night Furys in a way that I don’t hate, which is impressive. Usually as soon as a second Night Fury is presented I stop reading, but not this time. I can’t wait to see where you take this.

I love it! :)

Interesting title and I like the story thus far hope to read the next one soon :)

Yeah, I can see this going a *long* way at the current rate.
Always good to see a story that breaks the forward for more! :D

Awesome chapter.
When Hiccup was climbing Clawless, you instead wrote Toothless climbed her. *suggestive smirk*

I really like this kind of httyd stories !

Chance. A bit unrealistic there.

Maybe a bit of worldbuilding could've come first, but I understand the hurry. When you have a pressing idea - plot bunny, as they are known, everything that gets in the way of following it seems extraneous.

Good writing. I can't pin down the tense nor the writing style, but I can't pin down much that's wrong with it except for the common reliance on words like 'seemingly' or phrases like 'couldn't help', though I suppose that last is excusable. The characters should directly DO.

Other than that... I'll be following this.

Intresting story cant wait to see more