I really love this story so far! I feel like no one really has an appreciation of Legolas/Harry stories anymore. I like how the plot is believable and understandable (unlike other stories I’ve read) and that it’s easy to follow. Though “if there are glows then there are grows” is the saying. Please keep in mind that this is friendly criticism and not to be hateful. I feel like you are telling not showing the story. I don’t feel like I’m in the story itself and am just reading the words, if you know what I mean. I think that would be fixed if you gave more detail and the like. But otherwise I really love the story’s plot and the grammar and spelling is wonderful.

xxxx Kudos xxxx : )

Does this mean that Luna and Ginny will also go with him and what about Sirius and Remus since it would destroy them to lose Harry.

will Harry make sure that no one can find out that he has a form and that the book looks like one of his school textbooks so that they will not find it.

Hopefully Harry also carries some money and his important items on him so that if something does happen no one else will find or get them. Also, I hope that he made it so that no one can touch the money if Ginny gets it along with Luna

interesting thanks for the update I must say you always have me wanting more at the end of the chapter they are just that good and that's with all the stories of yours that I have read

Thank you for update.

lol that was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more:)

Fantastic work !

oh such a good chapter

glad that they didn't find out though i was kinda hopibg that snape would be friendlier to harry n help out from time to time.. oh well..

sweet

love it.
please write more soon.

ugh..they better get out quick..

thank you for update.