Good thing it's only a dream lol

Nice one, i guess every boy can relate to a similar dream that leaves you wistfully lonely the next morning.

Oh man this was good! I hate dreams inside of dreams! This would be mortifying lol. Still kinda funny and random. Thanks for writing!

This was an excellent first fic! I really enjoyed the crazy dream aspects and how he just went along with them - it made it feel very real. And your descriptions were hot. I loved it!

That was super! Absolutely love it! :)

Very well written my dear, this was a lovely snapshot of the teenage mind taken with the skill of a professional.
Nothing like confused feelings of repressed guilt and and lust to make you want a blowjob!
Well done, and keep going with the writing; this was a marvelous debut.

great poor Harry

Soo good and poor Harry! Haha

Wonderful read! I especially love the kind little conversation Harry has with 'little Harry'.

This felt very much like a dream and very true to a dreamlike state. I have to say - and maybe I put way too much thought into this lol - but I loved Ginny taking Harry's glasses off for him. As a person with glasses, I really, really don't like other people touching them. It's a weird possessive thing. And I imagine Harry (who's vision is likely worse than mine) would feel the same way, so him having Ginny take them off in his dream is very indicative of how much he thinks of her and trusts her. Again, probably put too much thought into that, but I loved it.

And the Weasley's barging in- I did NOT see that coming, and I was sorely disappointed that their, err, fun was cut short. Especially the good bit! I'm quite cross with you for that. But it was very realistic and definitely showcased Harry's concerns towards Ginny and why he thought a relationship with her would be difficult.

Essentially, this had the perfect mix of dream-like haziness, smut (of course), and realistic concerns of Harry. I loved it so much! Thank you for posting this 3

I love the finished version even more than the draft! This is great. I especially loved the ending. Though — poor Harry didn’t have the dream end the way he thought it was going to. Haha.

Great little tale. Nothing is worse than an interruptus, lol.
The sudden appearance of people at the strangest places and the sudden disappearance of clothing reminds me of some odd dreams, lol.