Reviews for Sweetener |
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xdarkestlovex chapter 2 . 2/28 I hope you continue this sorry! It’s intriguing so far and I look forward to seeing what happens next. |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/5 Loved every single moment of reading this fic. I cannot wait for her magic to be revealed... Imagine Kakashi's surprise. Maybe it can be revealed when she is healing him or something. Update as soon as you can! |
L'archangel chapter 2 . 11/28/2019 Interesting start. Thank you. |
Lunary chapter 2 . 11/21/2019 Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Anonymous7654321 chapter 2 . 11/2/2019 Please is sooo good! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2019 This is very promising... Please update as soon as you can! |
Kiochii chapter 2 . 9/26/2019 I’m loving this. The way you portray Kakashi as somewhat stalkerish cracks me up and poor Hari can’t catch a break with him. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. I’m especially glad that Hedwig is still alive. |
orlha chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Interesting, can't wait to see how this turns out. Thanks for writing and sharing this |
ghnjgfjftr chapter 2 . 8/29/2019 thanks ;) was ther a magical promis in this chapter? |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2019 This is so good. I was thinking, maybe how Harry helps Hinata is she has a severe wound and Kakashi calls for Harry, whose is able to transform into a phoenix and she cries wound, thus healing her...with everyone being amazed for performing such a feature. Thank you for this! I will be checking often to see if you have updated this is such a magnificent story you have! I cannot wait for more! Please update soon! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2019 Oh please update this wonderful story! I hope she gets to adopt Naruto so he can have the family he needs and craves! I can only imagine everyone's surprise when she can talk to snakes. Maybe Fawkes followed her here? He can be instrumental as well...imagine everyone's reaction to that too! Please update soon! |
LPWomer chapter 2 . 8/17/2019 This is awesome!~ |
RuebyRose chapter 2 . 8/15/2019 This is amazing! Very on point for characterizations! 333 |
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 2 . 8/15/2019 This is an amazing story and very well written! I love forward to more, thank you for writing! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/15/2019 I love this! And I cannot wait until Magic is revealed and we get to witness powerful Harry! soon! |