Reviews for Sweetener
xdarkestlovex chapter 2 . 2/28
I hope you continue this sorry! It’s intriguing so far and I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/5
Loved every single moment of reading this fic. I cannot wait for her magic to be revealed... Imagine Kakashi's surprise. Maybe it can be revealed when she is healing him or something. Update as soon as you can!
L'archangel chapter 2 . 11/28/2019
Interesting start. Thank you.
Lunary chapter 2 . 11/21/2019
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous7654321 chapter 2 . 11/2/2019
Please is sooo good!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2019
This is very promising... Please update as soon as you can!
Kiochii chapter 2 . 9/26/2019
I’m loving this. The way you portray Kakashi as somewhat stalkerish cracks me up and poor Hari can’t catch a break with him.
I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. I’m especially glad that Hedwig is still alive.
orlha chapter 2 . 9/8/2019
Interesting, can't wait to see how this turns out.

Thanks for writing and sharing this
ghnjgfjftr chapter 2 . 8/29/2019
thanks ;) was ther a magical promis in this chapter?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/28/2019
This is so good.
I was thinking, maybe how Harry helps Hinata is she has a severe wound and Kakashi calls for Harry, whose is able to transform into a phoenix and she cries wound, thus healing her...with everyone being amazed for performing such a feature.
Thank you for this! I will be checking often to see if you have updated this is such a magnificent story you have! I cannot wait for more! Please update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/23/2019
Oh please update this wonderful story! I hope she gets to adopt Naruto so he can have the family he needs and craves! I can only imagine everyone's surprise when she can talk to snakes. Maybe Fawkes followed her here? He can be instrumental as well...imagine everyone's reaction to that too!
Please update soon!
LPWomer chapter 2 . 8/17/2019
This is awesome!~
RuebyRose chapter 2 . 8/15/2019
This is amazing! Very on point for characterizations! 333
MagicWarriorDragon chapter 2 . 8/15/2019
This is an amazing story and very well written! I love forward to more, thank you for writing!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/15/2019
I love this! And I cannot wait until Magic is revealed and we get to witness powerful Harry! soon!
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