First off, fun start. You write well.

Now, the most important... You have my absolute damn respect. Telling everyone to shove it as you have the pairings decided already. 10/10 right there. More author's need to do what you did. It's sooo important to have that decided early... And locked in stone.

Also, I love how you listed the peerage and full pairings like you did. I was actually planning on writing something similar; DxD with Moka and possibly Esdeath haha. Anyway, I'm sure I'll enjoy this. Good luck!

It's not a rewrite of literally everything I'd going to be different

This story is so much better than the remake. Another author writing himself into a wall with his choices. Oh well, time to move on.

What a shame, and it was such a good story too.
Could've been one of the best ones on fanfiction

This character is already fully develop
has a perfect personality
Has living loving parents and doesnt have any flaws

WHY WHY I SAY this was a fun story to read. Your new one can't be a remake if literally everything is different thats just a new story. Please Don't just toss this one to the curve.

Eh, you do you. I haven't read the original version, just stopped by to make a suggestion. Perhaps make him a member of one of the actual Pillar families? They're based on the demons from the Lesser Key of Solomon, so they are all determined and there's no such thing as a Uzumaki-Namikaze clan. Here's a list of houses with the title of Great King according to their rank in the Lesser Key:

Paimon
Parson
Asmoday
Zagan (Extinct in DxD)
Vine (Extinct in DxD)
Balam
Belial
Beleth

Great King is the title Bael holds, so they are essentially houses that should be on par influence wise with them but could have fallen influence. Two of them are listed as extinct on the DxD wiki list with all the 72 pillars. Anyways, good luck, I'll look out for the new version to try out.

please at least tell me kuroka and female vali are still in it.

shame, I liked this one better.

Good luck with the rewrite. For the record it is maelstrom with the r in front of the o not maelstorm. Look it up. Sorry if you think I'm being to harsh but it is a pet peeve of mine regarding Naruto.

noooooo Q_Q

noooooo

As long as Fem Vali is in it!

Update soon please

Hey ma'am nice story story so far