| Reviews for The Iron Gamer of Kumo |
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   TruePork chapter 6 . 7/30 Sooo many contradictions this chapter first how did he miss The head of a Beatle standing still that is twice the size of a dog. And he even said his farther was not close to him i dont get the whole getting angry at gamers mind thing either, this chapter was forced very |
| Yeovale chapter 11 . 7/29 hi, loving the story keep up the good work and i hope you post another chapter soon |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/24 Hope you are well |
| user51s2r chapter 11 . 7/26 excellent story, wonderful characters, great writing! Thanks for writing and sharing! |
| Waka Metalbelly chapter 11 . 7/21 :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D :-D |
| Zarroc789 chapter 11 . 7/19 Great so far looking forward to more. |
| Addlcove chapter 11 . 7/18 enjoyed this, thanks for sharing |
| Anthony1967 chapter 11 . 7/17 Been waiting for ages... I need mAh FiX CHAPTERRRRSSSSSSSS |
| RougePoncho chapter 11 . 7/12 This story is so amazing! I love Gamer stories and this one is by far my favorite in Naruto. Seriously! Self-insert Oc's are hard to do well and yours is amazing. Just wanted to give you some encouragement, it always makes my day when I get a notification that you wrote a new chapter. Thank you for all your hard work! |
| dustinpuffer chapter 11 . 7/9 Hmmm wasng he un a coma and this was a game? Also please correct me if Im wrong because i read everything in one sitting but wasnt Anbu a choice? |
| 6258489 chapter 11 . 7/8 I'm liking it. I'm also hoping that he learns some new skills, and now that you're talking about improving illusions I'm hoping he makes his with all the senses; sight, sound, scent, and touch and remember to include versions that can fool enhanced senses like scent for dogs and bugs, and vibrations and air currents, and pheromones. all the senses that I can think of are really just remembering to include enough detail remembering the entire electromagnetic spectrum. maybe even some more that aren't targeted on an individual... Also, I'm hoping that he at least starts another element... though I don't understand why his magnetic release doesn't include the lightning element, regardless of what Canon says it makes no sense to me...I do have to say though, if you get rid of all the blades but then use the stones as blades it's more a dirty trick than an honorable fight... I'm really liking this story though, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| tsun chapter 10 . 7/7 nice story and good focus on illusions than just pure ninjutsu。 |
| FLASHBACK11 chapter 11 . 7/5 please update! |
| BlackDove WhiteDove chapter 1 . 7/1 Ooh an iron sand release! I’m excited |
| Liasd chapter 11 . 6/27 nice |
