Reviews for The Smouldering Earthbender
The Lich King Toby chapter 4 . 7/5
This is so good, easily my favourite ATLA fanfic. I really hope you haven't dropped this story. Good job so far, and I hope you continue writing.
rhinocaputo777 chapter 4 . 6/4
Can’t wait for the next chapter
kept123 chapter 4 . 2/2
More chapters please
kept123 chapter 4 . 2/1
More chapters please
Energy flow chapter 4 . 1/18
Nice work my friend. I hope to see the continuation soon
Lazymanjones96 chapter 4 . 1/17
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
Zoom99 chapter 4 . 1/17
Great Avatar story I’ve ever read even though it’s doesn’t have many words it’s pretty good. Hope you keep writing
emoryjmorrill chapter 4 . 1/2
Nice
Tobias chapter 3 . 12/31/2019
Hi just want to say I really like this story and hope you continue it
emoryjmorrill chapter 3 . 11/29/2019
Nice
Glavie165 chapter 3 . 10/12/2019
Please do more chapters
razmire chapter 3 . 8/14/2019
There aren’t that many OC/Toph stories out there, it’s good to see someone adding to that small list.
Shock Wave8 chapter 2 . 8/9/2019
You used filthy frank in the rice field
8GoKey40th chapter 2 . 7/31/2019
Uh, what happened to your chapter 2?
Subject24 chapter 2 . 7/30/2019
Nice implementation of your fiction into the fiction of the show. It came off pretty smoothly worked into the episode. If you would continue doing that with further writing as you did this one, i think the stories would come off as a success for sure!
Great read "dude". Hope to be reading some more of your stuff again some time
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