Hello!
I have read your entire 'Son Of Artemis' story in the last two weeks. I must say, you are really good at mapping out and planning character development. Each character in your stories has progressed and changed throughout the story, which has made it incredibly interesting. You are also really good at planning the overall story, mapping it out to be different than the Pjo books, and keeping fresh twists in it (like the sudden appearance of Alex and the whole secret egyptian side part) I love how you could write the story to get us to love Bianca, as we don't have much to go off of who she is in the books. You really created an amazing character out of Bianca which made it a lot harder to see her go. Overall you did an amazing job on this story, and I love it so far! I cannot wait to continue reading.

Update

Um... Update please

I've been reading this story for a while now and I must say, it's one of the best stories i've seen, and you really should consider becoming an author. This series was the first story I have ever read in FanFiction and it really got me hooked. I really like the OCs in the story, Jay and Nikki always felt like their own characters and not super overpowered. The original characters were not out of character at all and the story felt very natural, in other fanfics authors just have random things happen to characters to move along the plot, and this story never felt like that, it really felt like this is what would actually happen if your OCs really got dropped into the world of Percy Jackson. Anyways, sorry for the long review, but can you please post an update? I'd hate to see this story die.

This is totally awesome! You've got no idea how much people appreciate this story. How much I appreciate it. If you ever take on a career as an author (which you better, considering how good you write, and even if it's beside another job), I'll be sure to read your work!
I want to be an author my self, and like many others I have encountered a writers block, but reading The First Son of Artemis inspired me to at least get some of my ideas down on paper, and I just wanted to say thank you. Thank you for inspiring me, even if that wasn't the main purpose of your story.
I'm looking forward to the next update. Keep up the amaZhang (sorry, I had to) work!
- NorthernTale

come on bro update pls and thank you

YPDATE UPDATE

Hi! I love your story and have read your series since like two years ago...

If it’s not too much to ask, could you update?

Hi yes please update I need your story

Finally! A Percy Jackson production that ISN’T the abomination that were the movies!

So Fun fact I didn't realize until I re-read Percy Jackson's Greek Heroes, The Whole 'man with one Shoe' Thing is in reference to a myth involving the original Jason

I would Die of laughter if someone calls Jay 'Sailor Moon' as an insult, Hint*Hint

Glad To see you're back

Jikki for life!

This chapter was awesome! I love the whole thing. We actually got to see the Roman and Greek sides of a goddess battling for control of one body. I won't lie. That's really scary. It's like the immortal version of Gollum and Smeagle on a much larger scale. So cool though. Please keep it up. God bless you.