wow

This is one of my favorite versions of Naruto . Seriously ?! Naruto Sage?! I could not even imagine such an outcome, but damn it is possible and you did it very, very cool. I just want to reread it, and even Mordred alter added it just gorgeous . Moreover, his desire, unexpected and quite interesting. Characters, every time I wonder how you do it so well ? Especially the romantic and mental (?) Part (experiences and reflections of the characters). Sometimes it's even scary how alive they are . The plot, I'm delighted, I could say a lot, but it will end only with the word GORGEOUS (but even so, the question arises, Naruto took and threw Sasuke ? Just without trying to understand? The same with the Akatsuki members, did he not try to understand them? ? Didn't even talk ? And even so easy to leave them without understanding, contradicts his own words, as well as the fact that understanding them but not helping.) (THANK YOU FROM ALL HEART FOR THE WORK DONE . AND I ASK YOU, PLEASE , COMPLETE THIS WORK TO THE END ... (I wish you the very best, especially health and happiness to you and your loved ones)))) ...

Moooaaaaarrrr

que este naruto y mordred sean felices

I’m liking this story. As I believe I said in one of my other reviews Medea and Medusa are my favorite ladies from Fate. Maybe I’m just a sucker for characters who get the short stick cause I love stories where one of them gets their happy ending. Now I have no idea where this story is going to go and I’m not a huge harem fan (though I get over it) I’d love to see Medusa get a happy ending with Naruto. As a Sage he could easily power her after killing Kayneth. Anyway I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it and I can’t wait to see what happens next.

-Genesis09

Please continue.

Not sure why people would pan that says pretty good you're setting up new characters who are either brand new or unused and making the third grail War something interesting. I mean hell you're using mysterious heroine X and that is always a shitshow and a half in a positive way

Inmejorable, sabes, siempre me he preguntado cómo haces para escribir tan buenas historias, ojalá algún día sus estúpidos traduce se percatan de que tan buen escritor eres

Yeessss! Mesa love Mordred! I ask for more thank you! I also very much love the Naruto. N I'm even more curious about this Mordred's past. I'd like to know more. Continue plz! Keep up the good work!

I can't wait to see the full scene of mordred crying at the end

And the plot thickens. It makes sense that you'd eventually start bringing in characters from Bad End routes of your own stories, but at this point I'm just going to assume that every version of Naruto has some rank of Trouble With Women and THAT'S the primary cause for all this. I mean the Fake Assassin Naruto started a love-hate relationship with a female Gilgamesh for crying out loud, and Sage has a literal man-eater and an ex from a parallel universe gunning for him, the former of which he is actively flirting with. You cannot tell me he doesn't have some kind of cosmic debuff going on. Hard to tell where this is going though. I mean it's getting darker than I thought it would, but at the same time it's still pretty light-hearted, although this is only just getting started.

Keep up the good NZ.

The chapter was great and we have the recurring mix up of Naruto and Arthur. Gilgamesh caster is something I look forward to, added to Carmilla.

Great chapter. Things got really interesting towards the end there. Watching Naruto train Waver is going to be very interesting. Caster Gil will be problematic as it is Gil but, wiser and with less of an ego so you can't play off that. (I always figured it was possible to play off Archer Gil's ego to trick him into fighting your servant with the equivalent NP in his vault to your servant's NP and win as he would not have the experience or knowledge on how to use it effectively which your servant would have allowing them to beat him.) Carmilla only has the one form for Assassin. Please keep up the great work and ignore all the haters and flamers as they are just jealous of your talent and make sure to take care of yourself.

Mordred and Naruto is best pairing.

All we need is Circe so we can have two human transmuters running around~