Ahhhh, I’ll actually tearing up right now. I think your writing needs a little work to add in more details and maybe exposition on the Umbrella Academy in this AU, however, the ending was amazing. Thank you for writing this story! Are you going to make a Alternate Timeline where Vanya is able to stop them before she dies? Because that could be a cool idea

Great now I’m crying on my break at work

YoU diDnT cRy dUrIng eNdGaMe?!
Also, VANYA IS DEAD?

I liked the idea, and the beginning was very interesting, but I'm missing some key details and the story seems to bounce around a lot. I think that with a little bit more context and idea of what is going on the story would be perfect.

I wish updates were every day

You'll be happy to know that I have already finished this story and have all the chapters ready. I'm just putting them out once a week because I'm a sadistic prick and enjoy the anxiety and suspense it brings.

I hope you continue this!