Nice, all that planning by Fink was no match for the power of a mom, especially a retired superheroine like Carol. Liked the reference to the cob awful Cats movie.

I didn't expect Fink goig to KO house I was thinking she would interrupt in the middle of the party now I'm more curious, also try not to worry about writing the fanfic if you have problems it's more important the you take care of yourself rather then write a story when your dont feel good, hope you fill better

I love this. Eager to read more works like this!

You know, this had a lot of things to be interested about. KO's wild imagination aside, he really wants to make this work.
Even had this little moment like in the show with him baring his teeth at Venomous :3

Though jealous Fink was my favorite part, and I wonder how she will play catch up with KO.

Okay I love the reaction Venomous at KO to his suit under his clothes and the mustche, I can really see it happening in the series

In the next chapter chapter could venomous, ko and darrel go for a drive but venomous has to pick up something at the store and he is talking to darrell but looking at ko when he asks him to drive the car up front in a minute and when he walks away he tries to throw darrell the keys but he accidentally throws them to ko and just to be clear venomous wanted darrell to drive the car but he was looking at ko when he asked that when he meant to talk to darrell and accidentally threw ko the keys instead of darrell so inside the store he runs into carol who ask how ko is doing and just then a car crashes through the store and the window rolls down revealing ko in the drivers seat and he says

"hey dad i know you told us to drive the car to the front of the store but i think you don't know i don't have a license" and than darrel sticks his head out the passenger window and says "you should of let me drive" and carol looks at venomous with a mad look

In the next chapter chapter could venomous, ko and darrel go for a drive but venomous has to pick up something at the store and he is talking to darrell but looking at ko when he asks him to drive the car up front in a minute and when he walks away he tries to throw darrell the keys but he accidentally throws them to ko and just to be clear venomous wanted darrell to drive the car but he was looking at ko when he asked that when he meant to talk to darrell and accidentally threw ko the keys instead of darrell so inside the store he runs into carol who ask how ko is doing and just then a car crashes through the store and the window rolls down revealing ko in the drivers seat and he says

"hey dad i know you told us to drive the car to the front of the store but i think you don't know i don't have a liscens" and than darrel sticks his head out the passenger window and says "you should of let me drive" and carol looks at venomous with a mad look

i did not think this chapter was boring i thought it was fun and enjoyable too read anyways i really like reading this story so far so keep up the great work.

Hazah! Screentime!
When it comes to being a dad to K.O., that's Mr. Garr's turf for sure!
I'll read more later.

LOVE BEAM! XD
Keep going!
I must have more!

Poor Rad and Enid!
Poor KO!
Poor Fink; you're not a baby! XD
Such good stuff!

I love this so much already!
Dad Venomous to Fink is cute, so being Dad to KO is sure to be something!
Must read more!

Finally!
A fanfic with KO and Venomous together; father and son!
Man, I am so tempted to write one of my own! Maybe.
Anyway, this is gonna be good!

I like it very much, the chapter if you didn-t mention the fact of S.U I wouldn't notice, can I mention a little theory of your story you are totally free to comment if is correct or not, that fact that all the incidents with the bat, the victims always where Fink or Venomous and let's take on count that the bats don't have anything special like the balls of the last chapther, so I was thinking if it was intentional but not at all, the answer: TKO
In TKO House, it demostrate that without being in total control he's able do little actions in the body of KO in the real world, even if in this season he's in the subconscious he stills have a little impact over KO whenever he was facing a not so pleasing situation and to end this in the cartoon when hes finally and talks to KO (before joining Shadowey Figure) he already knows and understands whats going on over PV, so it's posible for him in this fanfic that he's still seeing a bit of the situation take out just a little bit of his anger from the subconscious, after all we don't know how TKO feels towards the information of who is he's dad.

I hope it make sense this theory and that you enjoy it, even if its not canon on this fic.

Wow I could actually detect jealousy from Venomous when he saw Gar was teaching K.O. how to swing a bat. I agree with Boxman, Venomous does in someway care about his son although he is having a hard time showing it.