Man so much potential for this story gone, rewrite of the story would be advisable, the story sounds like 'the worst berserker', would've been amazing of a story if you changed the story a bit and fixed the grammar.

Ooooh. So that's the plot.

Also prize, not prise

Finally, the giant fell and Kazuma turned to look at its master, his eyes still glowing with the exes amount of power he had just taken from the monster.

Xxxx

Excess, instead of exes.

You're Kazuma is too OP and generic. It's as if you've stripped Kazuma of all personality he has and replaced it with the very thing he's meant to paody

for now

SEQUAL SE

I would like to see the sequal. What happened at the end?

Thanks for putting in the time and effort to write this i really enjoyed it! Also i’d honestly love to see a slice of life where Kazuma’s shenanigans with everyone from Konosuba spill back over into his original world!

at first I didn't like this but I am starting to love this. It's like Kazuma as adventurer is the total sum of his feats is amazing and I feel for him.

Epic

Sangat bagus :)

Yes Finally A Big Fight and what Happened to Archer anyway

Wait...
Who is the old man?
Don't tell me it is the idiot old inventor?

I love this fic. Although it has many, many gramatical mistakes I love the overall story. Is this your first fic? If the answer is yes I hope you can rewrite it in the future, with more experience in your back,v
Saludos desde Perú

love this fic each chapter really makes me tense thinking someone from konosuba might die