Are you, updating this every year? Fuck it, it’s good quality I’m willing to wait.

Continuation accidentally pressed Post.

Mind numbing but in a good way smut on AOL.

This story is great in all aspects and would be a damned shame if it didn't update more frequently.

Jesus Christ is this story only updated per year?!

This is fucking great and I really hope it's not a yearly thing because I'm pretty sure I'll be dead before this even reaches the halfway mark.

Stories like this are what I search for during this god damned pandemic.

This actually gets my mind racing and thinking about everything that's happening in the story.

Please update this again and not something like a yearly schedule it'd be a gigantic waste of a very good story.

Which is odd because I love your mindnumbing

This js actually quite good and realistic

This is really good.

Dios que intenso, necesito más, más. Espero con ansias el siguiente capítulo muchas gracias.

Hm. I wonder what Cinders game is here. Putting a single person in such a high position of power, especially one who isn’t willing to take shit from people, is absolutely terrible for Salem.

Enjoying it so far!

And with that it just got more interesting :)

I hate your Blake in this chapter.

*checks relationship tags*

Don't half-ass it. Don't tease it consistently then pull back and go a different way.

A new chapter every year...Thought this was a one off but there is certainly room to grow. Cinders maneuvering will be fun to watch although how she fit a campaign in wit her busy schedule of finding Amber and undermining Beacon is anyone's guess.

Hail to the king baby

my emotions are exploding, happy to see chapter two of this fanfic, fearful for pyrrha and jaun, waiting to see how far blacke will come with the whole thing

Sorry for english is not my lenguage

I actually see him doing a great job. I mean seeing how many screw ups in other kingdoms during cannon, someone like Jaune who would rather go fight and die then even think something like necessary sacrifice would be a good leader, definite should rework their vehicles and damn defences, I mean what idiot leaves train tracks standing when terrorists are known to be running about with a fuck ton of weaponry