Believing in God didn't save your parents... Really nigga, I don't know if the guy knows about religion, the reason to believe in God is to fear judgment day, plus like they need to live in this shitty world.

when you don't have something and have to bring it in from other countries/places it is called IMPORT, not export.

I'm enjoying this story but I don't really like this whole split personality thing. It's an overused trope and it's usually especially terrible in fanfiction. I hope this whole mindscape is just a one time thing that doesn't come up again.

will mc still be learning magic or not?

been a while since the last update,hope you'll update soon after you finish any IRL problems

I don't know if this problem is found in the future, but a lot of times, I think all the time, the word 'has' is being used instead of 'as' and vice versa. It has occurred way to much to be a coincidence.

As a wise Norwegian once said, “there are very few of life’s problems that cannot be solved with the proper (or potentially excessive) amount of high explosives.”

"...without the usage of unreasonable amounts of explosives…"

HERESY! There is no unreasonable amount of explosives!
*resumes wiring the air ducts with mines*

Why did I hear Clashing of Swords right before the explosion?

Get an editor please... has and as, your and you're, those are the most noticeable grammar mistakes you make, and it's really easy to fix, just google their meanings.

Was legit enjoying your story until you added a naruto like mindscape and alter MC's

goo o ovo oo ed ch p

govo od chh p

g od ch p

ch p