Reviews for Protector
Atea1793 chapter 1 . 6/5
This is rather badly written. You never really name the original character, the plotline is blurry at best, and the way you've written the characters from the show are shoddy at best. Like you've only seen each episode once and never dove deep into how each character works. The only character that remotely right is Lila and she's already a badly written evil Mary-Sue that Astruc created for the sake of drama...
animegamefanatic chapter 12 . 12/21/2019
DAMN...

Your going DOWN Rossi. And I HOPE Lila gets her karma;
Guest chapter 9 . 10/18/2019
I may be the ten and supposedly "innocent" but all I can say is Hell naw
FanGirl chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
I never understood the appeal of a "Reader Insert". What is the point?
Jackye15 chapter 9 . 10/17/2019
good to hear she's not bothering you anymore!
and
1 yes please
2 idk
3 no problem
Azarelrose chapter 9 . 10/16/2019
Stronger Marinette please. Also like reading Bella and Alex interactions.
Artemis Persephone Jackson chapter 7 . 10/13/2019
4
Jackye15 chapter 7 . 10/8/2019
I believe number 2 would be the best path, only gods knows how have I wanted to puch people who deserve it, but sometimes it's better to keep a cool head. and don't worry, I know from experience that karma always comes sooner or later, and it can be a pain in the a*
Inuyashalover288 chapter 7 . 10/7/2019
I so sorry that you have to deal with such a toxic person. Normally I would say just fight and get it over with since that would be my first reaction(I’m a nice person but I don’t go lightly on those who cross me).

However in your situation it would be better to inform your counselor and your parents about the situation. Also to have evidence of what you are saying that she does because just going of your and her words it’s just gonna boil down to she-said/she-said talk.

With the evidence( voice recordings, pictures and/or video of her behaving in a toxic manner,etc) you can prove how toxic she is and that your not just throwing out accusations.

Hopefully in the future you will no longer have any type of association with this person and can going back to having a peaceful life with those who truly care for you.
konohinamoto chapter 7 . 10/7/2019
Dude, good luck. I hope you get better and I suggest you talk to your parents and a counselor about her problems.
catspats31 chapter 1 . 9/8/2019
The writing quality is good in terms of your spelling and grammar, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken for being a second person or you-based story:

Entries not allowed:
5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

Please remove all of the elements related to the reader like "(Y/N)" and replace them all with any canon character or original character. Switch to first person or third person point of view. You can always put it on another site where it is allowed like Archive Of Our Own or deviantART.
Metz chapter 3 . 8/19/2019
I fricken love this so much and it looks shits about to get real!
Metz chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
FINALLY!, a fanfic that tells where the reader and/or oc is kicking the assess of those who believe Lilas' lies (including Lila), bullying Marinette and who is not an idiot with the (obvious) identities of the heroes, so thank you and plz update soon!
Metz chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
FINALLY! A fanfic that tells where the reader and/or oc is kicking the assess of those who believe Lilas' lies, bullying Marinette and who is not an idiot with the (obvious) identies of the the heroes, so thank u and plz update more soon!
darealduna chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
Well, I didn't think I'll like this but thia is great actually. But srly give the OC a name.
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