You know, author-san, I really wished that this story could have more chapters. But there are 2 marvelously long and well written chapters here, so who am I to complain?

This is the only fem!sabo or genderbend I'll ever accept. I usually loathe those but this one? I adore it. It has been a fic of sabo being badass

Sabo as a vicious Disney princess is so fantastic, that's some straight up badass battles where she fought tooth and nail to win. It's amazing and horrifying all at once.

I love how the world took a sharp turn due to Sabo having even more restrictions due to her gender and how being shackled made her more determined to be furiously creative at testing said shackles. Which eventually lead her to a Devil Fruit.

Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. And Sabo has lot of balled up fury in spades.

Ace and Sabo are twins in every way that matter and I love that. Just. It's so good.

This made for a great read, I’m glad I decided to check your profile after so long. I love this interpretation of Sabo, so ruthless and protective despite her lack of practical experience. Just as strong and sneaky despite being female, with all the social issues that brings.

On one hand I’m very disappointed there isn’t more, because this is great and more would be awesome. On the other hand, that was the perfect place to end this story. I only just finished reading, so we'll see which hand wins out once I’ve gotten some sleep.

omg i love this

wow...just wow. this is so good. Sabo is so badass. thanks so much for this wonderful fic. I rarely read genderbent fics because most of the time they're OOC, but here you portrayed Sabo well. I love it! Thank you again. Hope you continue writing and Good luck!

P.S. I like the pun in the parrots name. haha Polly CypherCiper Pol XD XD XD

Can someone please explain the joke about the parrots’ names because I don’t think that I get it.

:O ... Well, that was... I was on the edge of my seat the WHOLE TIME. :D I HAVEN'T EVEN BEEN TO *BED* YET! Dx As in, YES, I DID read this WHOLE THING in ONE sitting. :D *Arms in the air in a 'tada' type way* *Procedes to go to bed after hugging the author*

... Would you mind TERRIBLY if I saved this AMAZING play, no not story or fanfic, a FULL ON *PLAY*; to my notepad for safekeeping? I love this WAY TOO MUCH to see it gone or deleted. ;-;

Thank you for this amazing story!
I laughed so hard at some of Sabo's comments.

I love this so much.

This is really amazing. I'm already a sucker for female Sabos (especially if the story with her isn't a romance when it concerns Ace and Luffy). I hope we see Sabo meeting the Whitebeard Pirates.

I love this story. Where’s Sabo’s hat though or her goggles? Wouldn’t she at least wear them around her neck if she didn’t have her hat or had attached her hat to her belt because she doesn’t have a string on it like Luffy’s or Ace’s hats do, (at least as far as I know) and she wouldn’t wanna lose it in battle. I only ask because the three characters all seem to love and treasure their hats as part of their signature looks and it’s cute. Also this is the best genderbent Sabo story that I’ve read and I love it a lot. Please write more.

Nice! Very engaging!

Nice story, can't wait for part 2. Anyway mind doing a request? Ace's first original goal was to defeat Whitebeard to make himself known worldwide, until he joins Whitebeard himself.

When Luffy reached Wano, he learned from Tama that Ace shipwrecked in Wano years earlier back before he meets Whitebeard and they spend time together.

So what if during his stay in Wano, Ace seeing Wano's poorer regions and seeing Kaido and Orochi's doing to the country, has a change of plans and decided to try to kill Kaido instead along with Orochi. Can you imagine the outcome?