Your first lemon was a success. You did a very good job writing these two characters. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Hmmm

Nice

please do another story like romance and sex its so good

um, i love the scenario, I think the only thing needed was a bit more foreplay, especially with bella being a virgin, edward would surely pay better attention to her and prepare and stretch her a little before penetratrion, especially as he is probably not small