You did some very sneaky stuff with this. Bit surprised you haven't done Weiss

I think our bunny camera girl should get in on the action

11/10

I haven't even read halfway into the LARP and by gods I am dying. your writing skills are great, and I'm doubting if this is a really good crackfic, or a serious fic. 10/10

I wonder if Kali will find the video and demand grandkids from Blake and the other girls

Thank you.
Hmm... What's next? Velvet gets antsy? Joint mission with Team NDGO? Penny gets curious? Or perhaps, Raven wants to test the worthiness of the one who daughter "publicly"?
Please keep up the good work.

And it's another semblance forcefully activated! Good job. I must say I didn't like your characterisation of Blake but since you don't like writing her, I understand why you did it. At least we have a chapter with her.

I thought the theme was going to be BDSM but role-playing and male-dom also fit Blake... Adam is going to be soooo pisssed. Oh boy watch out Jauney boy.

Eh, ever think writing a glory hole chapter or a stuck-in-a-wall one? I could easily picture Weiss in it.

This would be a good story if the sex wasn't the most boring vanilla shit, i mean even with multiple girls none of them have gone down on each other which is the lowest level oh kinky you could get. Like i said boring as fuck.

Salem?

Why is it that you never do Jaune and Cinder?

Do Jaune and Cinder more often.

I like the way you started the intro from Blake Pov, that was hot

Lool, that was steaming hot

Chibicat!Blake is best

Damn... Just damn. Not messing around are you? Good work.

I'd request a small skit of Jaune new daily routine and actual interactions with the rest of the student body and staff?

As my pick goes... Reese chloris, the skaterboarder once the exchange students come. In some kind of public setting, he'll make her an exhibitionist and jaune catches her.

How the hell is Jaune gonna get Raven?
...can’t wait to see.
Also hoping to see Ruby’s and Weiss’s reactions to Blake ‘s video.