| Reviews for to the ball of spiders and mice |
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   arischawn26 chapter 3 . 8/27 plis update soon owo |
| Rubber and Gum chapter 2 . 6/2 oh shit ILLUMI |
| Rubber and Gum chapter 1 . 6/2 i love smarmy bastards and mind games as well, can't wait for my favourite rat to appear 3 |
| Coolfire30 chapter 3 . 12/30/2019 A new concept. I like it. |
| xenocanaan chapter 3 . 12/2/2019 I can't wait to read more! |
| belladu57 chapter 3 . 11/12/2019 Very good |
| kimchi759 chapter 3 . 11/9/2019 I still don’t understand the parameters of her Nen, but I’m sure it’ll become clearer as the story goes on. I enjoyed reading the conversation with Illumi. I wonder how they first met. If she can remember what he was like as a child it has to have been more than a few yrs ago. I wonder what sort of contact she’s had with the other members of his family, & how many yrs older she is than Neon. Does Neon rlly have no idea what her sister does? How did their abilities awaken & develop? What’s the deal with her body guard? I was more critical the past two reviews, but I’m still looking forward to the rest of your story. & i appreciate the quality of your writing. Thanks for sharing. |
| kimchi759 chapter 2 . 11/9/2019 Can you please...not use the descriptor “noona romance” unless you’re talking about Korean characters or a Korean story...? Just say it’s a romance where the female is older. It’s kinda iffy to try to apply a Korean term to a Japanese story. Thanks. |
| kimchi759 chapter 1 . 11/9/2019 No need to fret. Your protag isn’t even close to being OP. She was terrified of Chrollo & was at a distinct disadvantage while “negotiating” w/him. According to your characterization so far, he could have killed her & she would have been helpless. Anyway, there is no such thing as OP in a shounen universe. As long as you provide a background & rationale behind her abilities, nothing is “too much” — we don’t even get much reasoning for the OPness of canon characters besides genius and/or bloodline. Basically, as long as she’s not suddenly One Punching-ing Ging, Meruem, Hisoka, or even Gon, she’s never going to be “too strong”. As long as she still faces conflict of some sort & undergoes growth somehow, she’s fine. Make her as “OP” as canon allows. |
| Entranced by you chapter 3 . 11/5/2019 pffffff oh no no. poor her thanks for the update |
| MissEkat597 chapter 3 . 11/4/2019 Ooh this is getting interesting! Wonderful chapter! Can’t wait for the next one! |
| guadadominguez4 chapter 3 . 11/4/2019 Oh~! This is getting more and more interesting! Especially with Illumi Here (...Is Strange That I Really Like Illumi?)~ Jejejeje! Anyway, THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE, AUTHOR-SAN~! See Yah~! |
| LittleAngel2292 chapter 3 . 11/4/2019 Great chapter omfg lol |
| LittleAngel2292 chapter 2 . 10/29/2019 Great chapter I loved it so much |
| LittleAngel2292 chapter 2 . 10/29/2019 omfg I'm laughing so much |
