interesting start. hope u keep at it.

Nice story, look forward to more.

Werewolves... crap

Fleur Apparated them across international borders?

And what are Andy and Teddy, chopped liver?

I do hope we'll be seeing more than this. It is immersive writing and I'm greatly enjoying your tale.

good

"The differences that were there were different from England.". Huh? The differences were different? That's why they are called differences. That's just an odd way to phrase it.

That aside, I'm loving the story so far and can't wait for more.

I hope you have harry use more advanced spells than 'expeliarmus'. He was fighting a tough S.O.B. Harry will have to be better than that. I guess im hoping for a more deadlier harry in the future.

enjoying the story, a little hard to read. the formatting is off. still looking forward to more always liked HP/FD pairings

I get the whole FD/HP thing but really seems to go overboard, maybe sort of mixed. Ron yea but he's always been an ass, Ginny needed to be done dont like her anyway, their parents hmm

Ooooohhhh. This story is getting good. I like the werewolf arc. Better than a Voldie return. Now Harry has to stay in France. Look forward to the jump. I also love his interactions with Gabrielle so far this story

now that was an interesting chapter. sucks about youre wrist but i am glad 2 see that you got this chapter up. an interesting development to say the leest. cant wait 2 find out what happened during the jump and any new developments. hopefully an escalation is harry and fleurs relationship

Guess this is where I leave. I came for a harry/fleur post-war fic, but instead, I'm getting a werewolf society and werewolves coming back from the dead bunch of nonsense. Good luck, but not for me.

Hi,

I was really excited to see an update notification for this story in my inbox this morning. With all that’s going on, we definitely need some great reading material to see us through and you’ve delivered once again!

As for the chapter, I loved how we got to see Harry and Gustave in action (with a special call out to that bit with the ring, I thought that was pretty brilliant). I thought that the action and plot revelation was equally measured. It looks like we’re setting up a confrontation later on between Harry and Fenrir, which raises so many questions about what the Werewolves are up to and if Bill and Lavender will be involved. It also makes sense to have Harry stay in France given the revelation as anybody who knows the Boy-Who-Lived would expect him to return to his homeland with the mindset of protecting anybody he deemed close and personal, regardless as to whether or not they could fend for themselves. Plus it’ll be interesting to see more interactions between Harry and the family as well as seeing how Harry x Fleur develop.

I also wanted to take a special amount of time to extend my sincerest appreciation for my character in this installment. The description was spot on and I thought that his (my) actions were quite on the nose as I could totally see me acting and speaking in such a manner. Plus I’m “over the moon” (to coin a pun) that he (I) got to save Gabby and Jean from kidnapped or turned or even worse, so it goes without saying that as of now this is my favorite chapter. Of course there might be some bias!

In any event, this was a great installment and I am really looking forward to the next chapter ahead! I hope all is well on your front and that you keep up the great work!

Respectfully,

TheLifeLongEditor