Please update this is really good.

I will welcome any Precure-Rider fanfic into my family. Unlike other, you didn't rehash and focus on your own original story which is interesting. I am looking forward to your story

By the way. It's suppose to be Ziku-Driver. Zikan driver makes no sense since you don't even hear the Zikan part at all in the series. Unless you are trying to make a pun out of Jikan which is time in Japanese but Zikan is still the wrong name for the driver.

when i first saw this i thought it would be crazy. But when i read it I love it!

Wait... did the Another Rider victims turn out to be Sento and Banjou themselves? If that’s the case then the fourth wall is going to get obliterated. I wonder if there’s a Woz...?

For a first story, you have done pretty well. The story is fluid, the writing’s well-done and your characters seem to be pretty good for now.

I like to see how this series will pan out.

Kamen Rider and Precure project
read Futari wa Pretty Cure A New Legend inspired by Asbel Longhart.
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