Reviews for A Solid Foundation
Lora chapter 35 . 7/31
I discovered (rediscovered?) this story several days ago and just finished Part One. I thought it was well thought out with an engrossing plot. Well done. I look forward to the next part.
Lisa Clark1 chapter 35 . 7/31
It was a fantastic story. Thank you for writing it. Look forward to part 2. Take care of yourself.
Meggiemoo chapter 35 . 7/29
OMG, I adore this story! Can’t wait for part 2
szabo.alexandra1991 chapter 35 . 7/31
Thank you for the update! Virtual hug! It was an amazing ride and I cant for more! Virtual hug!
guest chapter 35 . 7/29
wow, what a chapter! seems like it's been too quiet on the albus/gelllert front though. i can't wait to see what's next!
Crazy Girl Writer chapter 35 . 7/30
I liked this story a lot! Can't wait for part two. The ending seemed a bit rushed in this and I was disappointed that you set up so many spots to have the longbottoms checked out by someone other then st mungos but then didn't. Many times you mentioned having them checked by muggle doctors or goblin healers and made it clear that st mungos wasn't to be trusted but they kept falling away after one mention. I expected them to be moved with shapes mom. I expected sirius to talk to the goblins when he talked to them about Harry. There were just so many times you set up you were gonna do something and then it fell away.
Also what ever happened with Narcissa and her scars. There was the thing Augusta was gonna make her, the spell ioanthe was gonna reuse, and the surgeon Emma was gonna take her to.
Despite my ramblings about plot holes I really did like this story so far and hope to see that sequel
Thanks
Rose chapter 34 . 7/28
I love the story! All the different character and relationships- I really enjoy the interaction between Emma and daniel when they're being cute... or when she threatened him with divorce if he tried to get up off the table after surgery- made me laugh out 't wait for more.
mega700201 chapter 35 . 7/29
Thanks
lmcdanl chapter 35 . 7/29
Great chapter! I’m so glad they were able to save Harry’s grandparents. The priest is intriguing. I’m not sure what he’s up to but I’m glad he saved McGonagall. Sirius’s proposal was sweet; a dance mob would have been a little too Fuller House. Is he going to make Draco his heir? All in all a fabulous story and I look forward to the sequel!
CuteHarmony chapter 35 . 7/29
Wow I loved this story. I cannot wait for part 2. I’m so excited to see what will happen with the kids, speaking of You said we will see more of the dark trio but will we still see Neville and now Luna involved? I really want to see all five being this rag tag group of friends. I’m also now wondering where they will be sorted.
LadyWillowElf chapter 35 . 7/28
this was great, thank you!
ClaireR89 chapter 15 . 7/27
I like the premise/plot but some of the...actions and powers and abilities are so out there it’s like “what in the world is that”
ClaireR89 chapter 14 . 7/27
Only getting memories from Snape? Where’s everyone else
ClaireR89 chapter 8 . 7/27
Need to tone down the italicized words, some are important, most are pointless. But with using them so much it’s making them less effective.
Inferius57 chapter 34 . 7/27
This is a Awesome story.
I'll add it to my story alerts and to my Zombie Proof Vault.
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