"Look forward on making your stay betterThat's kinda rape-y

'He may be an emperor But he's still a person at least'

I think that's up for debate...

Then again I might be wrong

Huh... My Knowledge of CG is somewhat limited, I only watched L1 two years ago... that was it

I do think she seems just too quick in accepting the whole other world thing..

Gary SStu character: Check. Overly large harem: Check. Inhuman sexual stamina: Check. Emotional aspect of a relationship skipped: Check.

Conclusion: fairly boring power trip story

not too bad. though I was expecting the last line to be 'they found something that will change the course of their conquest in their favor even more.' due to Alex their conquest is going a lot faster so the line 'even more.' would fit better. really hope that a few of the Gundam series characters will be in this. if so Raimius would fit well in this as mobile base commander and a possible lover. though, I actually wonder if Alex would be like Winston Churchill on the political side of things, and face Bradly in a duel to the death for the knight of 10 position. hope this will help. looking forward to more. until then, later!

Hope Alex gets to Pilot a Unicorn Gundam!

I liked this this type of start the first time since I read it, maybe even the second time. But it is the sixth time I have read something exactly like this and it is a little frustrating, I understand it is quite hard to make a first chapter, but to do something so unoriginal? I do hope the rest of this FanFiction changes for the better.

Wish i can unsee this idiotic nonsense of those "I will tell you everything so you can trust me and i am good including my paat and darkest secret".

Nice to see your mind is not a logical thinking but full emotional decision

Ah, so glad to see my original story being the basis for so many SI stories. Actually makes me a little proud that people are working with my stuff.

Umm shouldn't he be enhanced with cybernetics considering how big his harem is?
Or do you plan for him to die in the glory of SNU-SNU.

nice one. hmm, just don't make the conflicts too quick and add a bit more detail via, what is happening to the landscape, to feel like you are there. looking forward to more. this will be epic. until then, later!

nice

;)

Nero and the other two are from the fate series or look up fate gene order

who's Nero? i try looking up characters and see who they are if i don't know them and i try looking up Nero and nothing comes up, not even a wiki profile.