I love the story! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Loved this chapter !

Yay they're off to get Beck!

They're definitely in trouble now.

Her being Obi-Wan's apprentice is going to cause problems.

I'm interested to find out more about Marion as well.

Dooku sounds like he has devious plans for them, not good.

They seem to have a strong friendship, I love it.

This is cool, can't wait to see how Obi-Wan and Val's relationship grows.

:))

Beck had better be alright! I know Omega said he wouldn't hurt him but like idk this dude is shady af!

This was such an eventful chapter! So, Granta Omega is Beck's dad. I vaguely recognise the name, but given the history you've explained, he definitely doesn't sound like a good guy. Now he's taken back, and I don't blame Valencia for being determined to get her son back. I remember Ferus a little from the EU as well and I'm actually really liking the role you've given him here, and I can't wait to see him help Obi-Wan and Valencia.

I can't wait for the next chapter, your story is really original and I love it

I LOVE this so much! Your opening was perfect. The details were amazing and everything flowed wonderfully! (No wonder you're a published author ;) haha) I love Valencia's story so far. It is very intriguing. Definitely looking forward to some Obi-Wan and Valencia ;) ;) haha. Thank you for all the hard word you put into your fanfics. You always do a fabulous job. Kudos! Love you! :)

I just started reading and I devoured all the chapters! I’m a big Star Wars nerd, and I love the dynamic between Obi Wan and Val. Please keep writing, because this is honestly one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time!