Reviews for The Azure Flame of Remnant
hjaanderson13 chapter 1 . 6/30
jaune is the sokka of the group
kpmh2001 chapter 9 . 6/8
This was a really nice chapter, expanded upon a lot of other characters that benefited quite a bit from these little chats. Iroh, of course, coming out as an absolute badass, and showing his sillier side with Zane shows that you understand the nuances of his character.
Risen Devil 98 chapter 8 . 5/26
You said that you would need help in deciding who to pair Azula with, yes? I have my personal opinion on this, and that’s the best I can give. So far, the most interesting one I can see happening right now is Azula x Weiss. It may look like it would happen really fast, but trust me when I say that the way to slow that down is to set up more moments like in the Hospital Wing. Start them off as awkward, but not uncomfortable, and as you progress throughout the story, gradually replace the awkwardness with romantic tension that only builds up more and more. As for how the pairing actually becomes official in this story, I’ll leave that up to you. After all, you are the Writer, so its your decision at the end of the day.
Risen Devil 98 chapter 5 . 5/22
One thing to keep note of is that 3-man teams are not a thing within the Academies, so if you haven’t already, I suggest you find someone to fill in the U in team AZUR for this instance
Cyan-Snake chapter 8 . 4/10
I think that was probably the worst way to do this chapter from how the last one ended. Everyone is forcing her to reveal herself to them, people she barely even knows. She just wants control of her life and literally EVERYONE is forcing their way on her and a lot of people are lying to her. So when she gets out of the sick bay she just goes 'oh, you were right, let me reveal myself to practical strangers, that will make my better'.
st4t1c sh0ck chapter 7 . 3/11
Azula should be more dominant, if she didn't want to tell jaune and the other, she doesn't,but overall thanks for the fast update!
Cyan-Snake chapter 7 . 3/10
Honestly? Azula is in the right here. It's her secret to share, not be demanded of her by everybody. They are all making it worse for her and she probably would be getting better if they actually just let her do what she wanted for once in her life.
st4t1c sh0ck chapter 6 . 2/27
You got to update more frequently, the waiting is killing me XD
Mr.Green37 chapter 6 . 2/27
Oh Iroh. I missed you.
kpmh2001 chapter 6 . 2/27
Iroh's a talented man, but even he has his work cut out for him. Still, it makes sense the Spirits would drag him along, given his close ties to the spirit world and what he did for Zuko
Azucon chapter 5 . 2/15
I have no idea who Radiance is, but Zane is a pretty neat addition.
kpmh2001 chapter 5 . 1/28
You certainly have my attention with this story, Azula was a perfect pick to make something unique.
st4t1c sh0ck chapter 5 . 1/14
Azula and Neo, I didn't know i needed that, now I can't wait for her to meet cinder, since cinder is a great value Azula
VileG chapter 5 . 1/13
The fun thing is that if Azula manages to recruit someone with an L in her name she could realistically be in charge of Team AZLA (Azula), having the team name be the same as her own seems like something she'd enjoy.
UnitedLuck chapter 2 . 1/11
could've been a great story but the lazy story writing and lack of the basic understanding of Azula's character ruin this story
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