He's dead Jim.

Wh'yd you even bother with a rewrite if you aren't gonna work on it? I say leave this abandoned and go back to the original version.

I've recently started getting into FanFiction and I have to say I've been finding some real gems of stories here during quarantining. I very much enjoyed the original version of this story and I look forward to seeing the rest of the rewrite. Love the references, sarcasm, and quirky humor and views on the canon characters as well as the OC's. Grammar is pretty damn good as well but I suppose that's a given considering how ur texan(according to ur story) so you dont have grammar and spelling issues that most fanfiction have.

All in all, hoping ur health got better after ur operations, and hoping that you continue writing.

Nice story though, but can you update it please ? I have been waiting for the update bro.

R.I.P.

I really hope you update soon. I really enjoyed the old fic, but with all the blaring inaccuracies from the more recent volumes, maybe it's for the best. I hope you keep Violet. She's too adorable to be left out of this fic. I kinda want to make a new RWBY fic of my own because of this story...

I was not aware of this rewrite until a few days ago. Looking forward to seeing what you do with it my man, I loved the first iteration.

A promising story, please continue, Sir

So basically, the story is dead, right ?

please update. i read your previous two things on my turn and would like to see more

Playing on the guy before me. It would be funny if the Gods kept in contact with you. Like once in a while they'd just go into his sleep to see how he was hanging. Or that sort of thing at the end of Mork and Mindy episodes.

Here's an interesting idea. Every now and again, have a chapter where we cut back to the gods on Earth. In fact maybe have them meet and talk to a fan of the show, and have them, unknowingly, chastise the god. Claim that they overreacted and pointed out that maybe Salem actually didn't unite all of humanity against them.

"I mean if truly ALL of humanity went against them, then why did they send such a small force to fight them? Furthermore even if she did what about everyone who said no to her?" and other stuff like that. Could even point out how childish they acted over all. It would be funning if after they hear that, they do wonder why there wasn't more people there to fight them that day.

Got more ideas for potential godly misadventure if this interests you. PM me and we'll talk.

dood where is the next chapter?

I really would like to see The Brother gods react about the other gods that are fiction to us but real to other dimension couse they will shit their pants knowing about the multiverse's horror.

It'd be like a reaction fic but to gods and other beings that will make them look like children to the gods in RL Lovecraft's, SCP's Scarlet King and other more being that will make them thunk twist about their existence.

Also (i am the guy who write the previous post) for me the magic isn't really a problem if Colt have a weapon, are trained and a semblance, the Maidens use the magic, and i don't think than Colt recieve the same magics powers than one Maiden.