Reviews for OK and
Dev Lohera chapter 1 . 6/22
update soon
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8
Wow!great so far! Harry is being super smooth/manipulative with fleur and getting the truth out, all while taking care of his enemies. I do feel sad for narcissa though, it always seemed to me that she was just a mother who was trying to do right to protect her child while being dragged around by the whims of her insane husban.:( hope she and malfoy get out of there and get into a better life. Keep the updates rolling:)!
Warpwind chapter 1 . 6/5
no ntr? shame.
hugp1x chapter 6 . 5/26
Eh, that's enough for me.

You went full Danaerys with Harry. He's normal one second, and with a stroll through Diagon Alley he turned into a psychopathic rapist. You do you, I guess...

That's about a million steps beyond being selfish and 'not giving a fuck' anymore, and would be enough for me to drop the story anyway - I can't get behind such protagonists - but in the scope of your own story, you went from zero to 'Ted Bundy' and skipped everything in between.

You didn't earn this Harry. It feels like you had an idea of what you wanted Harry to do and be like, and you just went there with no build-up.

I also found it odd that you had Penelope write such an inflammatory article under her real name... she'd be dead in about three seconds given the contents, and nobody seemed to mention her. Weird. It would also be rather easy to backtrack the owls delivering the papers and torching/killing everyone involved with printing them.

Not well thought out.

Best of luck. This story definitely isn't for me.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/24
Only one date in and then marriage? Lmaoo
Guest chapter 6 . 5/22
From the first chapter to now, it's pretty fucking cool.
tpowe15 chapter 6 . 5/21
Great chapter! I love the way you're depicting Harry a lot. Hope to read more cheaters soon!
sivachandan007 chapter 6 . 5/19
that is one nasty but well written chapter
OoOXylionOoO chapter 6 . 5/19
Well Harry's morale change too damn fast, if someone asks me.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 5 . 5/19
Pretty good chapter. Keep up the good work.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 4 . 5/19
Thanks for the chapter.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17
Great update
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17
I have no problem with the death of the Dursleys, they deserve a worse death for treating a child like a slave.
However, I have some doubts in the relationship between Harry and Fleur, in the previous chapters I had understood that he had limited himself to using some magical assistance to be noticed by Fleur ...
I sincerely hope you limit yourself to just a little magical assistance, because otherwise it would be rape.
Personally, I don't see any problems with a bit of magical assistance, after all people normally use perfumes, jewelry and better clothing to get noticed. As long as he doesn't use something that completely removes Fleur's free will (like love potions) I agree with this strategy to win Fleur's heart.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17
Harry should go somewhere muggle and use Morsmordre, get everyone pissed at Voldemort for exposing or nearly exposing magic.
viniL98 chapter 6 . 5/18
Cool story. I really like your darkish Harry approach. Keep up the good work.
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