Reviews for Wipeout
hiraishin101 chapter 7 . 2/29
I enjoyed this fanfic enough that I went and looked up, and started watching, stoked. I'm a few episodes in so far, and it's okay. To be perfectly honest, I enjoyed this fanfic far more than I'm enjoying the cartoon, even as short as the fanfic is in comparison.

Though it is really nice to be able to put faces to names and have a better idea of some of the stuff going on in the fanfic. I don't dislike Johnny Front-Desk guy, but I am glad you replaced him with Martha. Felt pretty upset seeing her get kicked out wrongfully like she did, plus she's actually pretty cute.

On the other hand Reef is an idiot, a sexist, a bonehead, and I just can't help but dislike him a majority of the time. I'm glad you kicked him out in the fanfic.

Would love to see another Stoked fanfic though.
Born2BeGodLike chapter 7 . 1/4
Never heard or seen stoked but the chapters were short so why not read it. Definitely like it and favorite it.
R-king 93 chapter 7 . 11/19/2019
Awesome chapter
Guest chapter 6 . 11/14/2019
I was half hoping he’d end up with Martha, oh well. Keep up the great work!
MarTinez9 chapter 7 . 11/14/2019
I was kind of hoping for the harem rote and it was kind of a short story but it was still good.
Guest chapter 7 . 11/12/2019
Have to be honest, I thought you’d do a harem route here.
NRGman chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
please update lovey class, naruto loud, the uzumaki family and Face The Wrath!
I really want to know what happen next in these stories
coldblue2015 chapter 7 . 11/11/2019
Okay, so I'm not going to review every chapter from the surprise update!

"Wipeout" was a great short story and I feel satisfied after reading it.

The Corn Cobb Prank came back with vengeance! I love that Mr. Ridgemount decision on unleashing Naruto on his rival was like hesitant choice, similar to having to think over unleashing a Nuclear Bomb or Invading a Country. It was awesome!

Naruto and Lo:

I have to admit, I did not care for that pairing and as I read the story I actually like where ended up in the end. I thought it would be Naruto and Martha, but no. It was interesting bit of trauma that Naruto lived in Japan and dealt with discrimination that it comes from looking so differently as Naruto does. Lo helping Naruto out the Wipeout Mascot costume, was great to read and I love the idea how Naruto did long for Human touch and being around Lo. It was great in the end that Naruto and Lo are married, with baby son and another child coming along the way. It was just great to read where that happy ending came in and I love that Mr. Ridgemount went into overprotective Father mode once Lo let it slip that she and Naruto were dating!

I did like how Kelly was more antagonistic, so that was fun to read!

Keep up the good work and thanks for finishing this story!
LoamyCoffee chapter 2 . 11/11/2019
god this is great!
hellfire45 chapter 7 . 11/11/2019
Good chapter and a really good story I do wish it was longer but still great
garza75 chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
This was a great story.
kival737101 chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
Ok I was not expecting it to end so quickly I thought it would be involved with the WHOLE series and Naruto would score with Lo, Emma AND and maybe those Bikini Models
Blizzard Blood Wolf77 chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
It was funny to read given how it went despite never watching the show at all, one thing that was funny was us Canadians might be nice, but push us too far and things could get nasty, as everyone has their limits, some very short while others have a long patience before completely losing it, it was funny to see how two parents who think their kids are complete "angels" are destroying everything that isn't their own.

Nice to see the terror that is the corncob prank that you have made is still there, putting people in a medical coma with how it goes and the only thing we see is the aftermath of people twitching in fear all by a corncob
Jebest4781 chapter 7 . 11/10/2019
this was quite nice to see how this story got wrapped up
Jebest4781 chapter 6 . 11/10/2019
this was pretty good on what you're doing
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