I'm seeing spelling and grammar mistakes. The Grammarly program/app would help.

Fantastic story, though! I love the idea of TikkiPlagg being married. Keep it up.

Honestly the grammar isn't that bad. All writers make mistakes, even one's that have been writing for a long time, so I hope you don't let the comments get you down. Most reviewer's genuinely just want to help. -My advice, if you could simply add period's at the end of your sentences it would make things so much easier to read. I really do like the story so far though and I hope you keep going. 3

This is a great concept, but you should use more punctuations and end every sentence with a period.