Reviews for The Family Apparatus
Genevieve chapter 6 . 9/24/2019
It's nice that Jasper looked over Celeste's eulogy for her. It seems like an awful long time from their deaths to the funeral though. Unless it's after the burial.
Genevieve chapter 5 . 9/22/2019
Edward got a little harsh there with her at the end.
Essence-chan chapter 5 . 9/21/2019
Ready for next chapter!
Booklover1314 chapter 5 . 9/21/2019
Omg I loved this
Genevieve chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
I'm surprised the cast is coming off that soon. Normally it's at least a month, or even two. Emmett and Alice were nice as always, but I hope Edward, Jasper and Rosalie warm up to Celeste after a while.
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 4 . 9/20/2019
:) looking forward to more
Genevieve chapter 3 . 9/18/2019
It's neat that Celeste is a reader, but I have just never liked Catcher in the Rye. I know it's required, just don't like it. It's sad none of the other circus folks could take her, but it is a big responsibility, especially with them traveling. Good to see the Cullens taking her, but are they vampires? Or is it an all human fic?
Genevieve chapter 2 . 9/16/2019
I guessed right on her age. I hope Esme and Carlisle are thinking of adopting her. Foster care has some good families and some crappy ones, so she might wind up abused if she got in that. Seems like Esme is feeling motherly toward her already.
Genevieve chapter 1 . 9/16/2019
Well, Celeste must feel terrible to lose both parents at once that way. Is it just me or does it seem like somebody caused their deaths by messing with the equipment? And how old is Celeste? She must be under 18 for them to be discussing foster care for her. 15 or 16 maybe? She seems mature for her age.