-_- yep dropping this fic cause lala force to marry that pig, ugh (even saruyama is better than this shit)

this story becomes more and more weird! already the yuri, I had trouble digesting it, the scene with the principal was on the verge of crossing the red line, but Lala forced to marry with another than Rito for I don't know which reason, I say stop!

I really don't know if I will continue reading.

I know this is for humor and is a parody. But seriously? No...just no...good luck writing this.

Surprisingly short chapter...Oh well...

What the hell is this chapter golden darkness should beat that frog end of discussion

me estas tomando el pelo sobre tu san sanders?
el tipo que pregona a los 4 vientos sobre el gran exito venezolano?
posible pedofilo sanders?

si no fuera por el lemon me iria

Not sure just how sarcastic the comments about bernie being scandal free are, but considering how all the other dem candidates were depicted at least somewhat realistically, then i think it is time to move on..

RIP Nana. You’ll be missed.

This is getting really hilarious! Though poor Rito is in a huge problem right now

I think the story is getting better,thanks for your efforts.

Nice story

While I like the idea of Rito being a man while still retaining his personality and being a King, I think the execution is off, I saw the original chapter 2 btw, I can't tell if that was the real chapter 2 or a joke.

For example, the very first chapter has Rito accidentally molesting the First Lady, how the heck is he going to come back from that? For that matter I can't fathom how Rito has decided to accept his role as King of Deviluke yet he still can't keep his clumsiness in check and still falls down on top of woman? For that matter him falling into the First Lady like that felt incredibly forced, if maybe Celien (I think I got her name right) came in with a bottle of pop and knocked Rito down then that would've been a little better, instead we have classic Rito trying to do his best somehow tripping and ending up in a woman skirt in the worst way possible.

Now you have all his in-laws, his entire blood family and the entire planet hating Rito, not just hate him but dispised him. You literally put Rito in a situation where he can't bounce back from and it was only 2 chapters in. How is Rito not crying at that point? How has his wives not realized they need to stop being so lustful and actually be Queen's of Deviluke? The preasure must be astronomical for Rito and half the current chapters are just Rito banging his girls, which isn't a bad thing if it's done right, but the fact you put Rito in such a position where he is literally hated by everyone except his harem is not a good start to a story.

Maybe if you showed Rito's stress, the preasure he is facing, the massive responsibilities he has for not just Earth but the entire Galaxy, then the story could be better, but it feels like your setting Rito up to lose and forcing the cliche's on the series down our throats, everyone is more than happy to just hit Rito with all sorts of negativity, you literally turned an entire species and planet into bullies against Rito.

When is the first of Rito's in laws going to demand their daughter to divorce Rito? Who'll be the first girl to be disowned because they won't leave Rito and they want to cut the shame and embarrasssment? How long until Rito's parents ask him not to be a part of their lives anymore? How long until Mikan says she dosent want him around ever again? 2 chapters in and a whole planet despise's Rito when he is barely an adult himself and has a ton of preasure and stress the likes the President can't even imagine, he was there, he saw Rito trip, he knows it was an accident and it would've made even more sense if Celien was the one to cause it, heck he could've announced that it was an accident.

Heck you made it even worse when you had Rito fall into his harem like that. Seriously, how the heck did he fall onto his girls like that, I'm pretty sure that's impossible even for anime standards, it's forced beyond forced and made a bad situation even worse, it almost makes Rito trying to be responsible pointless.

Even his girls don't feel developed, I mean Lala literally hasn't changed in terms of personality and feels as stupid as ever, she's a Queen now and now this chapters had her ruin another diplomatic meeting all because Mea is extremely perverted and lacks common sense. Is Rito going to snap? Is he going to tell some of these girls they need to grow up before Earth wants them gone? Mea, Momo and Nemi can't seem to curb their perversion and that's doing a lot of damage and Lala, for all her genius, is extremely stupid. Granted it would've been funny if the Cardinals left and then the chaos happened but no, let's make Rito be hated even more.

I see what your trying to do, I really do, trying to make Rito into a responsible King and husband while juggling his life with his harem, I can imagine that it isn't easy to write, but you keep putting Rito in a situation were he will lose and now this time it was religious figures, that one might've been the straw that broke the camels back. I half expect a letter from the World Leaders requesting him to leave, I half expect Rito's parents to tell him to leave and never come back, despite Yami being her sister in law and best friend she can't associate with Rito anymore so she says good bye.

I mean the world can't declare war to an empire that severly outclass's them in terms of weapons and military and yes they would be sacrificing the devices they got for medicine and climate change, but at this point they would certainly say they aren't interested in joining the empire and just want Rito and his chaotic harem off the planet.

Unless Rito saves the entire planet then Rito is not going to be liked and he'll lose his home. But that's just how I feel and my opinions, I mean no offense to your story and can tell your putting effort into it.

Keep writing, this has potential, it just needs to reign back its cliche's and misfortune for Rito.

“President Bernie Sanders.”

Instant favorite and follow.

my God! I have never read anything so hilarious! I roll on the ground holding my ribs so much I laugh!
Poor Rito! between his "godlike" falls and the inimitable Shenanigans harems, His reign is far from rest!

interested