Reviews for Golden Sun: Paladin's Heart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really really good. I'd imagine writing the battle scenes is tough but you certainly pulled it off extremely well. I'm looking forward to another update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok... So I finally got around to reading this. . Sorry it took so long. First thing I thought of was "holy cow, this is a long chapter". Guess I was right. Well done as always, though. I like the twists you put in at/near the end, both with Karst and Alex. And the illusion Dullahan was clever... One for the books, that... |
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![]() ![]() Update Soon! :( |
![]() ![]() Update! Updates are cool! They bring light to the world and everlasting peace to those who want them! I might be exagerating, but this is the truth that is untruly true! Good thing this is annonymous otherwise I would look like a complete idiot, but it is and I can be if I want! Update! Please? Yeah I think you get the point by now... update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really cool. Please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous as always, TO. Keep on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() whens ur next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this really the end? If so, what type of end is it? Anyway, really nice story and I HOPE you write a next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story keep getting interesting. It just makes me want to read this story over and over again. Go Isaac and Mia! Nice descriptive words in your battle scene. You're a great and talented writer and please continue on writing this story. |
![]() ![]() up is self explanatory. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good chapter. I especially liked how you wrote the fight between Picard and Agatio. It's much more descriptive than the other fights that are written in the average fanfic (no offense meant to other authors). I also liked the plot twist near the end of the chapter where Karst and Agatio decide to respond in kind to their treacherous siblings. (Btw, I'm sorry I didn't get around to reviewing this earlier. I'll try to do better next time.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice very nice...:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWAHAHAHA EVIL IS VICTORIOUS BWAHAHAHA! Do keep this up I pray ye;) This is far to much fun for it to stop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, this chapter is up to your standard, long though it is. Please don't make the next chapter all talk, as they rarely go well unless done in a manner that is interesting. |