Reviews for A Drunken Marriage in the Crossairs |
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Ferno16 chapter 2 . 11/30/2019 Please, please, please... don't give up on this story. |
JohnJuanRamboJr35 chapter 2 . 11/2/2019 I love this story so far so please could you update |
iron-slayer-dragon chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 Cant wait for more chapters |
The Evil Critic chapter 1 . 9/27/2019 To start, this first chapter seems so familiar from another Drunken Marriage fic. Not sure if that's because it's an almost copy and paste, or that those I've seen all seem to start out the same, and that's really sad that I can't discern which. I mean, really? Team members get injured, everyone overreacts and blames Jaune, and then Jaune gets mopey and can't be around his team. It's all nonsense and completely takes me out of the story. Not only by the irrationality of the actions of everyone involved, but the fact that the only reason to drink in these fics is because someone's depressed. Maybe I'm the odd one out, but I tend to drink in celebration. To bland of a beginning, as well as overused, for me to continue with this. You're not too far in, so maybe consider rewriting and attempting to bring an original take to the Drunken Marriage idea. Just a thought. |
the-lost-memories6 chapter 2 . 9/27/2019 Can't wait for the next chapter Is may the easily jealous type? |
TheGreatSeeker chapter 2 . 9/26/2019 Loving the story development very well done. |
Bronyhood. of Steel chapter 2 . 9/26/2019 Glad to see a may story keep up the good work. |
LandlordTheLordOfTheSeas chapter 2 . 9/26/2019 I thought that it was going to be Coco, which is funny because they have like the exact opposite weapon of each other |
redwolf23456 chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 Great story so far |
campione278 chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 Hopefully jaune doesn't forgive them so easy. Yang , Weiss and pyrrha they need to work for it. |
Luckenhaft chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 I'm going to have to fault Yang here for her first after Ruby and Nora gets buried under rubble is to blame and attack Jaune instead of trying to dig them out like he did after she started attacking him. Weiss is in the same boat for allowing said violence instead of trying to dig her Team Leader out. Seriously why waste time blaming Jaune for this when being buried under that rubble, Ruby and Nora could die at any second? I'm figuring the mountain path collapsed on them and they get buried under a rock slide was because of Magnhild's grenades. Maybe one of the grenades missed their mark and hit something up on the mountain they were at that caused the rock slide? I a |
TheGreatSeeker chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 Nice starting chapter hopefully this story is continued longer than other drunken marriage fics. |
Aravas chapter 1 . 9/23/2019 This is eerily similar to a drunken arcwitch marriage... |