Reviews for Beacon's Reincarnate |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/4 This is made so far I hope you make more |
iron-slayer-dragon chapter 2 . 12/14/2019 Cant wait for more |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2019 This chapter was interesting, you should make it easier to tell when we switch to another character though. |
Shattering chapter 2 . 11/3/2019 Bro Don't want to rain on your parade, but the stories where protagonist becomes strong after some dream is crap. Sorry if this offends you. BR |
Unsettling-A.I.R chapter 2 . 11/2/2019 Well, good intentions again. The problem here is that you kind of dump info, which many authors fall into the trap of. As for ghost Ashura, you could have solved it by simply having someone pass by Jaune and not noticing him. Hope you continue this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2019 You better not abandon this man...it has promise. |
Karlos1234ify chapter 1 . 10/11/2019 This is interesting |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 This is really interesting, i hope you make another chapter. |
Raizor chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Not bad, like it so far |
Dragon master 124 chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Interesting idea for a story, can’t wait to see more and perhaps longer chapters! |
Unsettling-A.I.R chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 A bit rushed, narration sure does have a long way to go, but the idea itself is sound. Do try to continue! |
ortizale317 chapter 1 . 10/2/2019 Why can't he have his own body? Why does it have to be someone else? |
Chrisplayz chapter 1 . 10/2/2019 Ashura choosing blondes as his reincarnation since 2007 |
MM Browsing chapter 1 . 10/1/2019 i hope in the next chapter will show which season and episode they are i hope it will be season 1 ep11 "Jaunedice" because once season 1 is over then jaune have the summer break to train. i look forward how jaune going to combine rwby like aura/semblance/dust with ninjustu, shuriken, chakra. how jaune going recreate or create a substitute version of jutsu using rwby material is ashura a shadow clone being fuse with jaune body? does that also mean he also have the memory and power of Hashirama and Naruto weiss and glynda seem to be a little too mean but if it was a first season then is understandable because weiss didn't become a better person after season one when rwby find out about blake being a faunes and white fang |
Gh0st123 chapter 1 . 10/1/2019 I like the story. Please continue it! |