This is just sooo lovely

That was GOOD! And sweet. Oh so sweet:)
I m a firm believer that its the small things that matters more. And that they r highly capable of bringing happiness to someone sad. As I guess that this fic just proved it right. Nothing can be more comforting than to embrace the person u cherish the most and just forget about everything else for a moment. It was really cute. Thank you so much for this. :))

It was a great story! Very cute and fluffy! Thank you very much for deciding to share it.

Cute fluff!

This was soooo sweeeeetttttt, aww wee my should write more of these it was really goooooodddddddd \\\\\\

Nice work

for a first timer, u did a great job! and now I really am looking forward for ur another maid-sama story. thank u so much for updated this, I like it! hopefully there will be another story from u. i'll waiting.. (:

WHAT AN ADORABLE FIC!
First off I'm a hugeeeeee sucker for all the post-marriage fics for Takumi and Misaki cuz hell we all wanted a LOT more detail no? Especially with all the extra one-shots Fujiwara's added to the manga , it makes you want so much more detail!
Secondly , this was so so soooo cuteeee cuz I could totally picture the whole thing inside my head and it fit just so right! You really nailed it! Grammatical errors and vocabulary is not a major issue but there's always room for improvement! You did a great job for a first timer hon!
XOXOXO

But maybe go for a less of a fanficcy feel? Idk it is fan FIC but some five are just so unrealistic. I’m not talking a bout you yours but maybe make ma guy Takumi a bit more angry.

Very cute!

It is true that as a doctor, Takumi would have long shifts. Some with being on on call or even double shifts. (I know because I have relatives that are doctors, and that it can be rather taxing.)
Relatively, this is based off Kaichou wa Maid-sama! Vol.18 Chapter: Oneshot: Special 4.
Also, the part about Takumi becoming a good father, when he never did meet with Yuu Hirose.
In all truths, Misaki Is, and always be, his happiness, along with forming a family of his own.

Your fanfic is simply amazing, very well written, and the way you described every single thing was just perfect, I really loved and now I'm looking forward to read more of your maid sama stories (if your willing to write more ofc :33) about Their Marriage, pregnancy and even Misaki and Takumi 's children (Rui and Sara). Thank you for writing such a beautiful one-shot.