Reviews for The Forgotten
Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
Such a well-written, beautiful story! Please write more R/C!
jennyfair chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
OH MY HEART. This is so lovely! I genuinely wasn't sure how it was going to end, but it was perfect!
LyonessaStark chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
This is beautiful! I love it.
faded-florals chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
Alright, this story is absolutely beautiful. I never would have guessed you don’t write much R/C, your characterization of both of them separately but especially as a couple felt so spot on and really hit all my buttons! I particularly love how clearly you describe their physical interactions, like where their hands are while they speak. It paints such an intimate picture that swept me away.

I was so worried when Christine was in the medical house and they brought in the injured man… but then for it to be Erik and the Persian was so perfect. I love how they shared a sweet moment over how they were married ‘In a way’, and then how you tied them back to Raoul as well at the end! AU GOLD.

The ending is so satisfying, I just want them to sit on the porch in rocking chairs watching the sunset and be happy for the rest of forever. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece!
LittleLongHairedOutlaw chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
i don't even know what to say. this is just gorgeous. i nearly bloody cried several times. there's a great contrast between the innocence of the beginning, and then the horror of the war, and raoul coming home. i had such hope that he would and i'm so glad he did but it was wrenching reading - first the description of philippe's death and the waiting for him. i loved the way you worked in erik, and that he was the one who freed raoul in the end. it was such a lovely touch of pharoga and he had befriended christine was very sweet. i love this fic and if i wrote 1000 words of a review it would not be enough. thank you for writing it and thank you so much for entering!
ghostwritten2 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
I rarely read R/C fics, but I wanted to read this one. And I'm so glad I did; it's really, really good. You made both the time period and the characters come alive.