Intelligent, interesting, and intriguing :)

Thank you for this treat.

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Lovely writing, per usual.

Okay, managed to find time to finish this today. I really liked the way you tied together all the different numerical references. your description of the burning sensation he felt before each “wish” came true was well done. And it took me a bit to figure out what was going on in the final chapter until I saw the time leap and realised who was in the bedroom waiting for him. But *sigh* you know I’m the kind of romantic who really likes to see them married. He might not seem the marrying type but I’ve always thought Molly would be - after all, she was engaged to marry Tom. Anyway, a rather unusual story but well-written with some awesome description and of course I always envy the fact that you can so easily reference real places in London!

That was very well done. Had me darting to and fro through the narrative to pick up all the threads. An elegant tale:-)

Very vivid description of the shower, and the twos are quite subtle, even if half expected:-)

A fitting description, romantic and mysterious, thank you. :)

Beautiful indeed. Great

This is such an unusual story, can't wait to find out what number 3 will relate to.

Yes! Always happy to see you back with something new to share. As always, your words are mesmerizing. Also loved the twist on ‘pray continue with your fascinating narrative’ ! Hah! Love spotting little things like that. Eagerly awaiting more!

More please. :)

Very intriguing, in fact. Thanks for the fast update. Waiting for the next one

Fascinated by the numbers theme, and the connected snapshots from different points of view works well:-)

Nice start! Intriguing. Looking forward to where you go with this.

Intriguing start. I am so envious of your knowledge of Zstreept names and the like. you’re so lucky you can throw in authentic English references with9ut having to spend hours in research, makes me wish aI was a native!

I’m not a big fan of present tense writing, to be honest, but I can overlook that in light of the fact that you have excellent vocabulary skills and description. Your writing is very much above that of the people who are just throwing a story together, and it speaks to your time and forethought.

I look forward to seeing how you address Sherlock and Molly’s relationship at this point in time seeing as it is post TFP.

Love all the different allusions to “three” and how Sherlock deduced them.

Of course I'm in! Waiting for the next one already.