Thoroughly enjoyed this. It had the best Dark Rey I have encountered, so far, in all 100 or so Reylo stories I have read in fanfiction. Overall, it was a great reworking of TROS's key plot points.
Great job. Thanks for writing it!

OMG. I wish this story went on forever. It was so beautiful.

Ugh I hate Hux

OMG. He is so sweet I’m gonna cry. She’s making me mad.

Yay. Ugh she’s so stubborn. He’s being as honest as he knows how.

Wow! Your story has so much promise! Can’t wait to read the rest. Also, just in case you don’t know, Kylo Ren’s mask was fixed that way purposefully. It’s a Japanese method called kintsuji, where broken parts of pottery are fixed by joining the broken area with a mixture of some sort. It’s not to hide that it’s been broken, but show the repair as part of the history of it. Just wanted you to know! Now on to chapter 2. :-)

Im glad theyre gonna attempt to make things work.

Wow this was a very interesting and intense chapter with a mix of so many emotions. I hope Rey can find Kylo even though he cut himself off from the force. Really good stuff.

This can’t possibly be how you’re ending this! NOOO! I can’t see why Ben would cut himself off from Rey? Or the Knights themselves were lying to her. Did he sillly pass out? And why didn’t Rey just go to Kef Bir, then take him to Ahch-To for recouping? And is Rey really pregnant? Did Ben hear that before he was thrown off? If so, please don’t torment Rey by letting her raise the child alone! Please post soon!

Absolutely great! The twist the story took. Was beyond wow. I didn’t see it coming! I’m glad Ben is back. And Rey was just a pawn. But PLEASE don’t end this the same way TROS ended. After all they have gone through. Let them live / love

Thank god Ben is alive.

Oh thank goodness Ben is back!

Well that was NOT what I expected. Her turning and calling Palpatine “Master”, I get. But why would you kill Kylo? Maybe have him slip into unconsciousness. So that she believes the bond is severed. But DEAD? I am kinda hoping you have another chapter after this. But I’m not sure if I want to know...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Damn, you made me invested in this story! Ugh! I love Rey and Ben's dynamic... I can't wait to see things from reverse with Ben attempting to turn rey to the light... can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no Ben is dead and Rey is giving into the darkside! Im afraid to read the next chapter.