Reviews for Mother Earth and Broken Moons
VolcanicFlare chapter 5 . 6/12
I hope your still working on this fanfic. There aren’t nearly enough earthbound stories and this one has been fun so far!
Spellflame chapter 5 . 6/1
Awesome!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/29
I love this so much keep up the good work i really hope you update this soon
Press-START360 chapter 1 . 1/22
Hey, can you have some in universe reason for Ness learning his friend’s PK abilities? Like PK Thunder and PK Fire? I think it’ll give you some more creative writing freedom
Press-START360 chapter 5 . 1/14
Could you at least mention JNPR’s antics with Team RWBY? Like as background characters when RWBY isn’t hanging out with Ness and Co.
Press-START360 chapter 4 . 12/23/2019
Please continue this, I absolutely love the story
M1nhTre37 chapter 4 . 11/22/2019
Please add the photo guy from Earthbound, it would be really funny to the cast react to him showing up out of nowhere while Ness and co stand there like nothing is wrong.
KneegearFakeget chapter 3 . 10/16/2019
Another Ozpin little puppet, i was expecting more
saitama1155 chapter 3 . 10/15/2019
oh shit a starman jr has appeared
M1nhTre37 chapter 2 . 10/11/2019
Nice, keep going
saitama1155 chapter 2 . 10/10/2019
bravo
saitama1155 chapter 1 . 10/9/2019
yess yessd keep it going