You might want to space out some of the dialogue from the description rather than have it clumped up together.

Another great chapter good job on the ending. Shit bout to get real

So the story is very interesting.
But what about Stephanie and Selina? do you have your daughters again? I hope so.
Please continue to write quickly. I need to know what to do next.

SHIT JUST GOT REAL

Nice love what your doing with the characters

Interesting; looking forward to the next chapter!