| Reviews for The Monstrous Tale of Dipper and Dani |
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   kevinbellemore chapter 7 . 6/16 Nice job there |
| kevinbellemore chapter 6 . 6/13 Nice job there |
| Jacob Phantom chapter 5 . 11/29/2019 Please update your story soon! |
| Shadow Ninja 287 chapter 1 . 10/17/2019 This is off to an interesting start. If I could make a suggestion maybe later Dani and Dipper could be ambushed by vampire creatures? |
| Illusn chapter 1 . 10/11/2019 The premise is interesting. Keep an eye on your tenses. You kept switching between present and past tense throughout, which can really bring you out of the story. I'd also focus more on showing instead of telling what's going on. |
