| Reviews for Dark Abyss |
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   storyteller1333 chapter 12 . 8/30 really hope this is still being worked on, i am loving this |
| metacllica chapter 12 . 7/27 Marianne to the Black Eagle house? I'm all for it! |
| rebfan90 chapter 12 . 7/27 great chapter! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/26 Woohoo! |
| Izunama chapter 12 . 7/26 I’m really curious how Sothis will feel about Byleth turning against the church. With him leaning towards helping the Agarthans, they don’t really have much reason to kill Jeralt, which means Byleth won’t get trapped by Solon. So theoretically Sothis won’t ever vanish. |
| Rebiele chapter 12 . 7/25 Interesting, Mariannne joining is nice, if that’s what you decide. Good work! |
| Just a fan of fics chapter 12 . 7/25 Hmm looks like Byleth might not get the sword of the creator until later then. |
| romeoraiden chapter 12 . 7/25 Things are heating up now, as if Lonato being left alive wasn’t thrilling enough, does this mean that the Creator Sword will be stolen? How troubling. Marianne smiling is hands down always the best part of any story that has her, and she must join Byleth. No buts, no fuss. |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 12 . 7/25 Excellent work! So it seems that Byleth has no intention of stopping the Western Church from attempting to steal from the Holy Mausoleum...interesting. So does that mean he won’t be getting the Sword of the Creator? If he still somehow did and Seteth once again claims suspicion with Rhea saying her having "faith he won’t turn to darkness", it would be oddly poetic in my opinion! Lol. Agreed? And also, YAY! Marianne is joining the Black Eagles! I’m so excited! I love her character. |
| I'mGoingGrey chapter 12 . 7/25 Things are beginning to change... best girl has joined the class. Also, something-something SotC something-something TWSITD. The developing relationship between Byleth and Solon is very interesting. If things continue as they are... will Solon and the Agarthans walk down a brighter path, or will Byleth walk a darker one? A little of both is my guess, but I suppose we'll see. |
| Lazruth chapter 12 . 7/25 Heh, knew it. Marianne will do amazing alongside Byleth, for sure. |
| Izunama chapter 11 . 7/21 Hot damn, thank you for the quick update. I like how the relationship between Byleth and Kronya is developing, and can’t wait to see how Byleth and Sothis react when they find out that Monica and Tomas are actually Agarthans. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/21 All according to keikaku. Those final line though! |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 11 . 7/20 Excellent work! Loved this chapter! I was waiting dearly for this! Good to see a nice, juicy chapter! Very enjoyable! |
| metacllica chapter 11 . 7/20 Monica/Kronya and Edelgard are jealous of Cathine/Cassandra because she got to rest on Byleth's lap while they couldn't. That's funny. Also I'm was surprised beyond belief when Byleth asked Edelgard to throw her axe at Catherine. For a moment I thought everything would go wrong, but shockingly enough everything worked out. Lord Lonato lives! |
