'you could star in a musical'
I see what you did.

omg this is so, so cute.

H hey! Looks like you expanded this fic from A3O to here. And I still enjoyed reading it a second time. "I don't believe you, you could star in a musical!" My head after reading that "I'M NOT THROWING AWAY MY SHOT! I'M NOT THROWING MY SHOT!"
It's so adorable! I come from a hispanic family and let me just say you got M'ma just right. My mom always worries about her hair when we have visitors, my grandma loves telenovelas! You basically got the hispanic traits down. Proud of you. And since I speak spanish, it really made my heart flutter when he said hermosa. I know it means gorgeous but there's just something about that one word in spanish that I just love. I love it when people put effort into learning our language. Especially if their doing it for a relashionship. It's sweet. Anyways! Great fic! Hope to see more from you.
Side note, I've been really eager for season 3 just to see where these two go. It's gonna be interesting with Gandra working for F.O.W.L and Fenton working for Scrooge as GizmoDuck!

Aww. This was so sweet. I love it. This was so great I feel like it should be in a episode. I love sweet little fics like this. They make me smile. You wrote this story well and it deserves all the praise it gets.
Do you take requests? If so I have two requests for stories you could do if you want to.
1. This story is actually more about Drake Mallred aka Darkwing Duck and Della Duck. In this story Drake Mallred meets Della Duck and become friends but they also have feelings for each other. They also have a few things in common like
They are both single parents
They are both stubborn and love action and Adventures
They are always determined
And they are both nerds in some form or another.
And Darkwing Duck and GizmoDuck team up together in this fic because of robberies going on in the city stealing things like weapons and other dangerous stuff in this fic as well.
2. This is an au for Ducktales. And it's based on a musical. It's is Hamilton Ducktales style and Fenton Crackshell-Craveria as Hamilton.
Anyway you are a great writer and I hope you consider my my requests.

Oh wow this is soo good!

This is a very unique story

Jsjsjjs It was very funny, I wish it had been that way in the show :'v xD
Saludos :)

This was so cute;

Me: MARRY HER! Marry her right now!

Fenton: *now blushing extremely*

Me: *mumbles* And save her from FOWL cause those guys suck.

Fenton: Wait what?

Me: Nothing!

This was a great one-shot! I can totally see this happening! It’s adorable! I loved it so much!