Reviews for Ship of The Line – Effect 31
Rorschach's Blot chapter 11 . 5/16
I'm enjoying this. Don't believe I've ever seen this cross before.
gaul1 chapter 11 . 5/7
Good chapter, keep up the good work, wonders what happens next.
jlnorris75 chapter 11 . 5/6
Nice another story to never finish
MrPowell chapter 11 . 5/4
This was a pretty fun, quick read. It's kind of a pity you've leaned so heavily on telling rather than showing your story. It feels like there's been four or five full stories in what you've done so far, but you've avoided delving into any of them. It feels as though you're summarizing to skip forward to some major plot, but honestly I don't know what it is.
I honestly don't know for sure who the protagonists really are, or what their motivations are. Sure, we know that Buffy et al are there, but we don't see enough of them, of their struggle, to see them as protagonists. Moreover, I don't know who the antagonists are supposed to be struggling against. Is it supposed to be the Batarians? They lost practically off screen. Was it supposed to be the demons? They supposedly mauled the fleet, but we didn't see it, and also lost off screen.
Also, what are these space demons supposed to be? Are they additions just made to make the BtVS universe fit Mass Effect?
MrPowell chapter 1 . 5/4
Interesting beginning. My biggest nitpick is that your last line of the this first chapter is rather flagrant about telling rather than showing. Look forward to where this goes.
firelordeg chapter 11 . 4/22
thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter as well as for all the time and effort put into this story please continue to update as soon as life allows
vampireharry the 2 chapter 11 . 4/22
Wonderful chapter! Keep up the great work!
MattKennedy chapter 11 . 4/20
Lol at the Council's reaction. It is kinda hard to believe.
BMS chapter 11 . 4/20
Typical councilors.
Won't believe anything that contradicts their own beliefs. Even when its in front of their eyes.
Melikalilly chapter 11 . 4/20
I love this story
D72 chapter 10 . 3/29
Kind of feels like you're chopping down from episodes to just scenes.
vampireharry the 2 chapter 10 . 3/28
Another excellent chapter!
grd chapter 10 . 3/27
Thank you for another exciting chapter. Cordy has a bad ass MACO suits her well. Wonder what the galaxy will make of this battle?
Fast Frank chapter 10 . 3/26
Very good chapter. "War is Hell."
MattKennedy chapter 10 . 3/26
Nightmare Construct is down! Yay. :)
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